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104 | 21 | 2018-02-27 02:25:10 | The words I cannot say | ..::Angel of your darkness::.. | 2005-09-17 | 4.6 | 883 | These are the words I cannot say But they come from the heart Despite all the arguments I've liked you from the start I like the way your mind works The way you're so unique And when I'm in my darkest hour I long to hear you speak I like the way you walk The way you slightly smile And when your move close to me You cause my heart to go wild I like the ways you're different I like those mysterious eyes Actually I like everything Even what's inside I long for you to hold me To feel your lips on mine I know it isn't work yet We need a little more time But these are all the things I guess I cannot yet say Like how I somehow manage To think of you all day Yes I'm scared you'll hurt me Just break me and leave I don't want to have to worry I don't want to be deceived How all this can work I'll guess we'll never know But don't turn your back on me yet I'm not quite ready for you to o go I'm sorry for writing this But its all I can do It the only way for me To say I love you For these are the words I just cannot say But things will be different One day... |
2005-09-17 | 2007-04-11 | 52707 | 104 | 2018-02-27 02:25:10 | xo kisses xo | ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-28 | Wow! i absolutely love this. the last line was amazing! 5/5 xo kisses xo |
105 | 21 | 2018-02-27 02:25:10 | The words I cannot say | ..::Angel of your darkness::.. | 2005-09-17 | 4.6 | 883 | These are the words I cannot say But they come from the heart Despite all the arguments I've liked you from the start I like the way your mind works The way you're so unique And when I'm in my darkest hour I long to hear you speak I like the way you walk The way you slightly smile And when your move close to me You cause my heart to go wild I like the ways you're different I like those mysterious eyes Actually I like everything Even what's inside I long for you to hold me To feel your lips on mine I know it isn't work yet We need a little more time But these are all the things I guess I cannot yet say Like how I somehow manage To think of you all day Yes I'm scared you'll hurt me Just break me and leave I don't want to have to worry I don't want to be deceived How all this can work I'll guess we'll never know But don't turn your back on me yet I'm not quite ready for you to o go I'm sorry for writing this But its all I can do It the only way for me To say I love you For these are the words I just cannot say But things will be different One day... |
2005-09-17 | 2007-04-11 | 52707 | 105 | 2018-02-27 02:25:10 | anneblyth | at 2010-04-23 | Love it..! i can relate..hehe,, |
106 | 22 | 2018-02-27 02:25:11 | A Disney Tale | DMG | 2005-02-18 | 4.5 | 610 | You say you're Cinderella Or you would like to be Does this mean that you've found Your Prince Charming in me? You also say you're Jasmine So Princess, please be mine A whole new world I'll show you A world of love divine Your favorite is Tinkerbell So I'll be Peter Pan Together we can fly away Off to Neverland And if you're Sleeping Beauty Then I will be the one To kiss your lips, open your eyes And fill your life with sun And if I was the Beast And your name was Bell I know that I could count on you To free me from the spell And if I was Prince Eric Would you come with me? As my Ariel I'd show you A love deeper than the sea Just like a Disney tale Filled all with love and laughter You and I will be together Happily ever after So tell me your desires I'll make your dreams come true A life of happiness Princess, I'll share with you Lisa, be my Princess And your Prince I will be Together we can live Our own Disney story |
2005-02-18 | 2007-04-18 | 52899 | 106 | 2018-02-27 05:22:11 | Ecstasy Thrill | ( F C D ) at 2008-03-28 | Aww. That's so sad. The final stanza was hurting. I felt emotional while I was reading this beautiful piece you penned. 5/5 |
107 | 22 | 2018-02-27 02:25:11 | A Disney Tale | DMG | 2005-02-18 | 4.5 | 610 | You say you're Cinderella Or you would like to be Does this mean that you've found Your Prince Charming in me? You also say you're Jasmine So Princess, please be mine A whole new world I'll show you A world of love divine Your favorite is Tinkerbell So I'll be Peter Pan Together we can fly away Off to Neverland And if you're Sleeping Beauty Then I will be the one To kiss your lips, open your eyes And fill your life with sun And if I was the Beast And your name was Bell I know that I could count on you To free me from the spell And if I was Prince Eric Would you come with me? As my Ariel I'd show you A love deeper than the sea Just like a Disney tale Filled all with love and laughter You and I will be together Happily ever after So tell me your desires I'll make your dreams come true A life of happiness Princess, I'll share with you Lisa, be my Princess And your Prince I will be Together we can live Our own Disney story |
2005-02-18 | 2007-04-18 | 52899 | 107 | 2018-02-27 02:25:11 | Monse | at 2008-05-24 | I love your poem and i like the way you wrote it and how you wrote every phrase of the poem like in the real movie. |
108 | 22 | 2018-02-27 02:25:11 | A Disney Tale | DMG | 2005-02-18 | 4.5 | 610 | You say you're Cinderella Or you would like to be Does this mean that you've found Your Prince Charming in me? You also say you're Jasmine So Princess, please be mine A whole new world I'll show you A world of love divine Your favorite is Tinkerbell So I'll be Peter Pan Together we can fly away Off to Neverland And if you're Sleeping Beauty Then I will be the one To kiss your lips, open your eyes And fill your life with sun And if I was the Beast And your name was Bell I know that I could count on you To free me from the spell And if I was Prince Eric Would you come with me? As my Ariel I'd show you A love deeper than the sea Just like a Disney tale Filled all with love and laughter You and I will be together Happily ever after So tell me your desires I'll make your dreams come true A life of happiness Princess, I'll share with you Lisa, be my Princess And your Prince I will be Together we can live Our own Disney story |
2005-02-18 | 2007-04-18 | 52899 | 108 | 2018-02-27 02:25:11 | DirgeVenustas193 | ( F P C D ) at 2012-06-17 | This was awesome! |
109 | 22 | 2018-02-27 02:25:11 | A Disney Tale | DMG | 2005-02-18 | 4.5 | 610 | You say you're Cinderella Or you would like to be Does this mean that you've found Your Prince Charming in me? You also say you're Jasmine So Princess, please be mine A whole new world I'll show you A world of love divine Your favorite is Tinkerbell So I'll be Peter Pan Together we can fly away Off to Neverland And if you're Sleeping Beauty Then I will be the one To kiss your lips, open your eyes And fill your life with sun And if I was the Beast And your name was Bell I know that I could count on you To free me from the spell And if I was Prince Eric Would you come with me? As my Ariel I'd show you A love deeper than the sea Just like a Disney tale Filled all with love and laughter You and I will be together Happily ever after So tell me your desires I'll make your dreams come true A life of happiness Princess, I'll share with you Lisa, be my Princess And your Prince I will be Together we can live Our own Disney story |
2005-02-18 | 2007-04-18 | 52899 | 109 | 2018-02-27 02:25:11 | Jill | at 2013-09-11 | I hope you don't mind but my husband recited your poem at our wedding in April. We had some small Disney touches since we are both huge fans. I want you to know that your poem was amazing and was one of the things that made my husband and my wedding very special. Thank you. |
110 | 22 | 2018-02-27 02:25:11 | A Disney Tale | DMG | 2005-02-18 | 4.5 | 610 | You say you're Cinderella Or you would like to be Does this mean that you've found Your Prince Charming in me? You also say you're Jasmine So Princess, please be mine A whole new world I'll show you A world of love divine Your favorite is Tinkerbell So I'll be Peter Pan Together we can fly away Off to Neverland And if you're Sleeping Beauty Then I will be the one To kiss your lips, open your eyes And fill your life with sun And if I was the Beast And your name was Bell I know that I could count on you To free me from the spell And if I was Prince Eric Would you come with me? As my Ariel I'd show you A love deeper than the sea Just like a Disney tale Filled all with love and laughter You and I will be together Happily ever after So tell me your desires I'll make your dreams come true A life of happiness Princess, I'll share with you Lisa, be my Princess And your Prince I will be Together we can live Our own Disney story |
2005-02-18 | 2007-04-18 | 52899 | 110 | 2018-02-27 02:25:11 | DMG | ( F P C ) at 2013-09-12 | Wow, I'm speechless. I'm so happy you and your husband found such a place in your hearts for my poem. There can't be any better motivation to keep me writing. Thank you so much and I hope your new family lives happily ever after :) |
115 | 23 | 2018-02-27 02:25:16 | The Last Poem She Wrote | Amit | 2005-04-29 | 4.7 | 1063 | In a little home, all alone; there once lived a girl, beautiful, five feet seven, her hairs had lovely curls. She loved a guy, more than she ever loved her life, and waited for the day to be recognized as his wife. She treated him like a gift sent from heavens above, & often said, he taught her the real meaning of love. She longed to be in his arms and hold onto his hand, he was everything to her - a lover and a best friend. He also loved that girl from the bottom of his heart, he had a strong belief, that none can do them part. Only obstacle he had was, he was too far from her, maybe 530 miles, I'm unsure what the numbers were. At times she talked to him about one of her friends, said he's the one on whom she can always depend. He asked her, "Oh! Well, then who am I to you???" She replied "You've made my dreams come true. You're the one whom I think of all day and night, you've filled my life with the happiness and delight. Whenever I close my eyes, It's only you that I see, I love you more than my life, you're everything to me." It was her best friend, the girl often talked about, Something's going on, now the guy started to doubt. At times, he was like a glass with anger filled upto brim, He thought an affair was going on between her & him. At times he thought how much she speaks is true, he wanted her to prove when she said "I love you." he often asked, "why don't you value what you say?" and she always replied, "why do you feel that way?" The distance between them had made a serious effect, and soon, like the start, nothing was now perfect. The girl's effort to stay with him didn't last too long, lovely melody of her life turned into a monotonous song. With thoughts of doubt each and every passing day, their trust was breaking & their love was fading away. Time went on slowly and nothing seemed to be fine, doubts in the guy's mind kept showing their shine. She missed him, and her nights were passing in a cry, She sent him many letters but he didn't send any reply. No words can explain, the pain she was going through, She didn't know how to talk to him or what else to do. She talked with one of his friend & asked him number, but he wasn't interested to talk and kept ignoring her. poor she! tried to search for him in things all around, and at the time she needed him, he was never found. He never showed his concern for her or ever cared. The pain she was living in couldn't be compared. The girl was really hurt and she commited suicide, The news next day read, "A girl, 20, yesterday died" In a room locked from inside, her body was found, stained in blood next to the bed, lying upon the ground. In her left hand, she was holding her suicide note, upon the letter, there was the last poem she wrote: "When you'll read this, I would not be here with you, but this doesn't mean, that my love was never true, Who was that guy, Honey? He was nothing to me, and you were my life, I just wish you could see... "I will love you for an eternity.", was your promise. but you did not trust my love for you and I hate this. You have now broken the promises you once made, So I am going far away by a cut with this blade. I loved you with all my heart and I will forever do, but what's the purpose of living, if I'm not with you. Maybe I wasn't your girl or you were unable to see, that you were my life, you meant everything to me. With one last wish, that I could once see your face, I'm going to heavens above, in the God's embrace. Remember, no one can love you the way I loved you, every word of promise I said, was cent percent true. This is my last present to you, for what you've done, I am going to a place, from where I will never return. As you'll read this, and I'm in the heavens up above, maybe then you'll realize the thing called true love." It was not supposed to end in this way, with a weep, now she's laying in the grave, forever in deep sleep. See, the doubts for sure, can cause a relation's death, so don't ever let doubts take away your last breath. please vote... |
2005-04-29 | 34514 | 30 | 2018-02-27 02:34:57 | allex0r | at 2014-10-31 | Em why is this so on point :( | |
111 | 23 | 2018-02-27 02:25:16 | The Last Poem She Wrote | Amit | 2005-04-29 | 4.7 | 1063 | In a little home, all alone; there once lived a girl, beautiful, five feet seven, her hairs had lovely curls. She loved a guy, more than she ever loved her life, and waited for the day to be recognized as his wife. She treated him like a gift sent from heavens above, & often said, he taught her the real meaning of love. She longed to be in his arms and hold onto his hand, he was everything to her - a lover and a best friend. He also loved that girl from the bottom of his heart, he had a strong belief, that none can do them part. Only obstacle he had was, he was too far from her, maybe 530 miles, I'm unsure what the numbers were. At times she talked to him about one of her friends, said he's the one on whom she can always depend. He asked her, "Oh! Well, then who am I to you???" She replied "You've made my dreams come true. You're the one whom I think of all day and night, you've filled my life with the happiness and delight. Whenever I close my eyes, It's only you that I see, I love you more than my life, you're everything to me." It was her best friend, the girl often talked about, Something's going on, now the guy started to doubt. At times, he was like a glass with anger filled upto brim, He thought an affair was going on between her & him. At times he thought how much she speaks is true, he wanted her to prove when she said "I love you." he often asked, "why don't you value what you say?" and she always replied, "why do you feel that way?" The distance between them had made a serious effect, and soon, like the start, nothing was now perfect. The girl's effort to stay with him didn't last too long, lovely melody of her life turned into a monotonous song. With thoughts of doubt each and every passing day, their trust was breaking & their love was fading away. Time went on slowly and nothing seemed to be fine, doubts in the guy's mind kept showing their shine. She missed him, and her nights were passing in a cry, She sent him many letters but he didn't send any reply. No words can explain, the pain she was going through, She didn't know how to talk to him or what else to do. She talked with one of his friend & asked him number, but he wasn't interested to talk and kept ignoring her. poor she! tried to search for him in things all around, and at the time she needed him, he was never found. He never showed his concern for her or ever cared. The pain she was living in couldn't be compared. The girl was really hurt and she commited suicide, The news next day read, "A girl, 20, yesterday died" In a room locked from inside, her body was found, stained in blood next to the bed, lying upon the ground. In her left hand, she was holding her suicide note, upon the letter, there was the last poem she wrote: "When you'll read this, I would not be here with you, but this doesn't mean, that my love was never true, Who was that guy, Honey? He was nothing to me, and you were my life, I just wish you could see... "I will love you for an eternity.", was your promise. but you did not trust my love for you and I hate this. You have now broken the promises you once made, So I am going far away by a cut with this blade. I loved you with all my heart and I will forever do, but what's the purpose of living, if I'm not with you. Maybe I wasn't your girl or you were unable to see, that you were my life, you meant everything to me. With one last wish, that I could once see your face, I'm going to heavens above, in the God's embrace. Remember, no one can love you the way I loved you, every word of promise I said, was cent percent true. This is my last present to you, for what you've done, I am going to a place, from where I will never return. As you'll read this, and I'm in the heavens up above, maybe then you'll realize the thing called true love." It was not supposed to end in this way, with a weep, now she's laying in the grave, forever in deep sleep. See, the doubts for sure, can cause a relation's death, so don't ever let doubts take away your last breath. please vote... |
2005-04-29 | 34514 | 111 | 2018-02-27 02:25:16 | Demi | at 2012-12-30 | Impacting! | |
114 | 23 | 2018-02-27 02:25:16 | The Last Poem She Wrote | Amit | 2005-04-29 | 4.7 | 1063 | In a little home, all alone; there once lived a girl, beautiful, five feet seven, her hairs had lovely curls. She loved a guy, more than she ever loved her life, and waited for the day to be recognized as his wife. She treated him like a gift sent from heavens above, & often said, he taught her the real meaning of love. She longed to be in his arms and hold onto his hand, he was everything to her - a lover and a best friend. He also loved that girl from the bottom of his heart, he had a strong belief, that none can do them part. Only obstacle he had was, he was too far from her, maybe 530 miles, I'm unsure what the numbers were. At times she talked to him about one of her friends, said he's the one on whom she can always depend. He asked her, "Oh! Well, then who am I to you???" She replied "You've made my dreams come true. You're the one whom I think of all day and night, you've filled my life with the happiness and delight. Whenever I close my eyes, It's only you that I see, I love you more than my life, you're everything to me." It was her best friend, the girl often talked about, Something's going on, now the guy started to doubt. At times, he was like a glass with anger filled upto brim, He thought an affair was going on between her & him. At times he thought how much she speaks is true, he wanted her to prove when she said "I love you." he often asked, "why don't you value what you say?" and she always replied, "why do you feel that way?" The distance between them had made a serious effect, and soon, like the start, nothing was now perfect. The girl's effort to stay with him didn't last too long, lovely melody of her life turned into a monotonous song. With thoughts of doubt each and every passing day, their trust was breaking & their love was fading away. Time went on slowly and nothing seemed to be fine, doubts in the guy's mind kept showing their shine. She missed him, and her nights were passing in a cry, She sent him many letters but he didn't send any reply. No words can explain, the pain she was going through, She didn't know how to talk to him or what else to do. She talked with one of his friend & asked him number, but he wasn't interested to talk and kept ignoring her. poor she! tried to search for him in things all around, and at the time she needed him, he was never found. He never showed his concern for her or ever cared. The pain she was living in couldn't be compared. The girl was really hurt and she commited suicide, The news next day read, "A girl, 20, yesterday died" In a room locked from inside, her body was found, stained in blood next to the bed, lying upon the ground. In her left hand, she was holding her suicide note, upon the letter, there was the last poem she wrote: "When you'll read this, I would not be here with you, but this doesn't mean, that my love was never true, Who was that guy, Honey? He was nothing to me, and you were my life, I just wish you could see... "I will love you for an eternity.", was your promise. but you did not trust my love for you and I hate this. You have now broken the promises you once made, So I am going far away by a cut with this blade. I loved you with all my heart and I will forever do, but what's the purpose of living, if I'm not with you. Maybe I wasn't your girl or you were unable to see, that you were my life, you meant everything to me. With one last wish, that I could once see your face, I'm going to heavens above, in the God's embrace. Remember, no one can love you the way I loved you, every word of promise I said, was cent percent true. This is my last present to you, for what you've done, I am going to a place, from where I will never return. As you'll read this, and I'm in the heavens up above, maybe then you'll realize the thing called true love." It was not supposed to end in this way, with a weep, now she's laying in the grave, forever in deep sleep. See, the doubts for sure, can cause a relation's death, so don't ever let doubts take away your last breath. please vote... |
2005-04-29 | 34514 | 114 | 2018-02-27 02:25:16 | Rachael | ( F P C ) at 2013-11-30 | The overall message of this poem is one that we see in life far too much...our own insecurities make us doubt the intentions of the ones we care about, in turn only hurting ourselves more....very nicely written and the message is conveyed well. Great job, keep it up! | |
116 | 24 | 2018-02-27 02:25:19 | Sweet Love's Deceit | Karl Wild GG23 | 2007-07-02 | 4.9 | 60 | After all the dead ends and lessons learned, Through all the heartache and memories burned, Could you open your heart and risk love's deceit? Or would you lick your wounds, accept defeat? After all the tears you've cried, the broken pride, Through all the times they've lied, the pain inside, could you open your eyes, to your own surprise? Or would you sever your ties, accept demise? After all the sleepless nights, countless fights, Through all the bitter sights, wrongs and rights, Could you open your mind, never look behind? Or would you stay confined, accept declined? After all the dreadful name's, childish games, Through all the picture frames, faded flames, Could you open the door, to love once more? Or would you recall before, accept to ignore? After all the broken hearts, we'll one day find, Through all our questions, true love is blind, Though a million things could knock us off our feet, Always remain discreet, for sweet, love's deceit. |
2007-07-02 | 2010-06-25 | 61976 | 116 | 2018-02-27 03:35:58 | Suicidal | ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-31 | That was so sweet....beautiful job on this piece....so heartfelt and passionate....very vivid inagery too....amazing work on this! Keep writing! I have to say, your poems are some of the best I've read! :) 5/5 |
117 | 24 | 2018-02-27 02:25:19 | Sweet Love's Deceit | Karl Wild GG23 | 2007-07-02 | 4.9 | 60 | After all the dead ends and lessons learned, Through all the heartache and memories burned, Could you open your heart and risk love's deceit? Or would you lick your wounds, accept defeat? After all the tears you've cried, the broken pride, Through all the times they've lied, the pain inside, could you open your eyes, to your own surprise? Or would you sever your ties, accept demise? After all the sleepless nights, countless fights, Through all the bitter sights, wrongs and rights, Could you open your mind, never look behind? Or would you stay confined, accept declined? After all the dreadful name's, childish games, Through all the picture frames, faded flames, Could you open the door, to love once more? Or would you recall before, accept to ignore? After all the broken hearts, we'll one day find, Through all our questions, true love is blind, Though a million things could knock us off our feet, Always remain discreet, for sweet, love's deceit. |
2007-07-02 | 2010-06-25 | 61976 | 117 | 2018-02-27 02:25:19 | AblissfulDREAMER | ( F C D ) at 2007-11-22 | Oh my .. this was just wonderful! I loved how the beginning of each stanza, was a question. It really got me to think about the hardships I have encountered in love. Each word you spoke, was simply easy for me to relate with. You took a topic many know, but you made it your own. I think, many have to go through loves obstacles, to learn from them and not make the same mistakes twice. Well done. it was a great read. *5/5* |
118 | 24 | 2018-02-27 02:25:19 | Sweet Love's Deceit | Karl Wild GG23 | 2007-07-02 | 4.9 | 60 | After all the dead ends and lessons learned, Through all the heartache and memories burned, Could you open your heart and risk love's deceit? Or would you lick your wounds, accept defeat? After all the tears you've cried, the broken pride, Through all the times they've lied, the pain inside, could you open your eyes, to your own surprise? Or would you sever your ties, accept demise? After all the sleepless nights, countless fights, Through all the bitter sights, wrongs and rights, Could you open your mind, never look behind? Or would you stay confined, accept declined? After all the dreadful name's, childish games, Through all the picture frames, faded flames, Could you open the door, to love once more? Or would you recall before, accept to ignore? After all the broken hearts, we'll one day find, Through all our questions, true love is blind, Though a million things could knock us off our feet, Always remain discreet, for sweet, love's deceit. |
2007-07-02 | 2010-06-25 | 61976 | 118 | 2018-02-27 02:25:19 | krae | at 2010-06-25 | I love this poem. Amazing. |
119 | 24 | 2018-02-27 02:25:19 | Sweet Love's Deceit | Karl Wild GG23 | 2007-07-02 | 4.9 | 60 | After all the dead ends and lessons learned, Through all the heartache and memories burned, Could you open your heart and risk love's deceit? Or would you lick your wounds, accept defeat? After all the tears you've cried, the broken pride, Through all the times they've lied, the pain inside, could you open your eyes, to your own surprise? Or would you sever your ties, accept demise? After all the sleepless nights, countless fights, Through all the bitter sights, wrongs and rights, Could you open your mind, never look behind? Or would you stay confined, accept declined? After all the dreadful name's, childish games, Through all the picture frames, faded flames, Could you open the door, to love once more? Or would you recall before, accept to ignore? After all the broken hearts, we'll one day find, Through all our questions, true love is blind, Though a million things could knock us off our feet, Always remain discreet, for sweet, love's deceit. |
2007-07-02 | 2010-06-25 | 61976 | 119 | 2018-02-27 02:25:19 | BJeter | at 2012-06-09 | Been there..done that..luv it!! |
120 | 24 | 2018-02-27 02:25:19 | Sweet Love's Deceit | Karl Wild GG23 | 2007-07-02 | 4.9 | 60 | After all the dead ends and lessons learned, Through all the heartache and memories burned, Could you open your heart and risk love's deceit? Or would you lick your wounds, accept defeat? After all the tears you've cried, the broken pride, Through all the times they've lied, the pain inside, could you open your eyes, to your own surprise? Or would you sever your ties, accept demise? After all the sleepless nights, countless fights, Through all the bitter sights, wrongs and rights, Could you open your mind, never look behind? Or would you stay confined, accept declined? After all the dreadful name's, childish games, Through all the picture frames, faded flames, Could you open the door, to love once more? Or would you recall before, accept to ignore? After all the broken hearts, we'll one day find, Through all our questions, true love is blind, Though a million things could knock us off our feet, Always remain discreet, for sweet, love's deceit. |
2007-07-02 | 2010-06-25 | 61976 | 120 | 2018-02-27 02:25:19 | sahar alameddine | at 2012-06-16 | This one is a master piece totally enjoyed reading this one bravo ! |
121 | 25 | 2018-02-27 02:25:22 | You Are The Perfect Guy... | Kailynn Makenna | 2005-08-23 | 4.6 | 996 | To: Derick I just cant find the way To express my love for you You are just amazing In everything you do The time I spend with you Is the best Ive ever had And you always know how to help me When its me whos feeling sad I dont know how to say this But ill do my best and try And I just want you to know That you sir, are the perfect guy You make me feel so special You make me feel so right And if I had it my way I would always hold you tight I hope that I dont lose you I pray to god each day Because as long as you are here I can push my pain away I love you oh so much And that I know is true Because no matter what I do I cant keep my eyes off you I hope we are together For time and time to come Cause I need you in my life To change who Ive become... |
2005-08-23 | 2009-06-10 | 215184 | 121 | 2018-02-27 02:25:22 | Divina | at 2008-04-17 | This poem is really sweet i know hel'll love it |
122 | 25 | 2018-02-27 02:25:22 | You Are The Perfect Guy... | Kailynn Makenna | 2005-08-23 | 4.6 | 996 | To: Derick I just cant find the way To express my love for you You are just amazing In everything you do The time I spend with you Is the best Ive ever had And you always know how to help me When its me whos feeling sad I dont know how to say this But ill do my best and try And I just want you to know That you sir, are the perfect guy You make me feel so special You make me feel so right And if I had it my way I would always hold you tight I hope that I dont lose you I pray to god each day Because as long as you are here I can push my pain away I love you oh so much And that I know is true Because no matter what I do I cant keep my eyes off you I hope we are together For time and time to come Cause I need you in my life To change who Ive become... |
2005-08-23 | 2009-06-10 | 215184 | 122 | 2018-02-27 02:25:22 | aimee | at 2008-04-21 | That poem is so true. i love it so much, i just sent it to my boy. it put a tear in my eye |
123 | 25 | 2018-02-27 02:25:22 | You Are The Perfect Guy... | Kailynn Makenna | 2005-08-23 | 4.6 | 996 | To: Derick I just cant find the way To express my love for you You are just amazing In everything you do The time I spend with you Is the best Ive ever had And you always know how to help me When its me whos feeling sad I dont know how to say this But ill do my best and try And I just want you to know That you sir, are the perfect guy You make me feel so special You make me feel so right And if I had it my way I would always hold you tight I hope that I dont lose you I pray to god each day Because as long as you are here I can push my pain away I love you oh so much And that I know is true Because no matter what I do I cant keep my eyes off you I hope we are together For time and time to come Cause I need you in my life To change who Ive become... |
2005-08-23 | 2009-06-10 | 215184 | 123 | 2018-02-27 02:25:50 | asian babe | ( F C D ) at 2008-12-16 | I love it!!! Great poem! (: |
124 | 25 | 2018-02-27 02:25:22 | You Are The Perfect Guy... | Kailynn Makenna | 2005-08-23 | 4.6 | 996 | To: Derick I just cant find the way To express my love for you You are just amazing In everything you do The time I spend with you Is the best Ive ever had And you always know how to help me When its me whos feeling sad I dont know how to say this But ill do my best and try And I just want you to know That you sir, are the perfect guy You make me feel so special You make me feel so right And if I had it my way I would always hold you tight I hope that I dont lose you I pray to god each day Because as long as you are here I can push my pain away I love you oh so much And that I know is true Because no matter what I do I cant keep my eyes off you I hope we are together For time and time to come Cause I need you in my life To change who Ive become... |
2005-08-23 | 2009-06-10 | 215184 | 124 | 2018-02-27 03:43:10 | HURRiCANESky | at 2009-09-21 | Its very clever. i like it :) |
125 | 25 | 2018-02-27 02:25:22 | You Are The Perfect Guy... | Kailynn Makenna | 2005-08-23 | 4.6 | 996 | To: Derick I just cant find the way To express my love for you You are just amazing In everything you do The time I spend with you Is the best Ive ever had And you always know how to help me When its me whos feeling sad I dont know how to say this But ill do my best and try And I just want you to know That you sir, are the perfect guy You make me feel so special You make me feel so right And if I had it my way I would always hold you tight I hope that I dont lose you I pray to god each day Because as long as you are here I can push my pain away I love you oh so much And that I know is true Because no matter what I do I cant keep my eyes off you I hope we are together For time and time to come Cause I need you in my life To change who Ive become... |
2005-08-23 | 2009-06-10 | 215184 | 125 | 2018-02-27 02:25:22 | Jessica | at 2009-11-13 | I love this poem. and the feelings expressed in it. |
126 | 26 | 2018-02-27 02:25:26 | The Missing Piece of my Heart | Marc Ortiz | 2007-07-12 | 4.8 | 84 | Do you remember your first special kiss? That one sweet kiss melted your beautiful soul. Do you long for that kiss to happen again? Close your eyes, picture that moment in time.. I remember the moment before our lips met, Her eyes gazed to mine, our lips just an inch away.. I held on to her hands and said, "I'm yours forever.." Kissing her softly in my room.. Suddenly.. Leaves are tapping down the window She stopped kissing me and said, "It was just the leaves." I said, "It's God blessing us from above." "Can you feel the angels, they're watching us." We were still gazing outside the window.. The sun starts to sink in the horizon.. I whispered, "I love you, You're my only one." Tears run down her face.. And she held her arms around me.. I whispered, "Your eyes are the window to your heart.. "And your tears are a proof that you have one." "God gave us two feet, two hands, two ears and two eyes.." But only one heart.. I came closer to her and said.. "Because God knows that I will find the other piece in your heart" |
2007-07-12 | 2008-03-08 | 117411 | 126 | 2018-02-27 03:34:52 | Savannah Kate | ( F C ) at 2008-07-01 | I love it! Its great! |
127 | 26 | 2018-02-27 02:25:26 | The Missing Piece of my Heart | Marc Ortiz | 2007-07-12 | 4.8 | 84 | Do you remember your first special kiss? That one sweet kiss melted your beautiful soul. Do you long for that kiss to happen again? Close your eyes, picture that moment in time.. I remember the moment before our lips met, Her eyes gazed to mine, our lips just an inch away.. I held on to her hands and said, "I'm yours forever.." Kissing her softly in my room.. Suddenly.. Leaves are tapping down the window She stopped kissing me and said, "It was just the leaves." I said, "It's God blessing us from above." "Can you feel the angels, they're watching us." We were still gazing outside the window.. The sun starts to sink in the horizon.. I whispered, "I love you, You're my only one." Tears run down her face.. And she held her arms around me.. I whispered, "Your eyes are the window to your heart.. "And your tears are a proof that you have one." "God gave us two feet, two hands, two ears and two eyes.." But only one heart.. I came closer to her and said.. "Because God knows that I will find the other piece in your heart" |
2007-07-12 | 2008-03-08 | 117411 | 127 | 2018-02-27 02:32:24 | dirtyhands | ( C ) at 2008-09-28 | Mukhang inluv ka ka pardz ah,, ^^ ganda! lufet mo tlga! proud to be pinoy! tnx! |
128 | 26 | 2018-02-27 02:25:26 | The Missing Piece of my Heart | Marc Ortiz | 2007-07-12 | 4.8 | 84 | Do you remember your first special kiss? That one sweet kiss melted your beautiful soul. Do you long for that kiss to happen again? Close your eyes, picture that moment in time.. I remember the moment before our lips met, Her eyes gazed to mine, our lips just an inch away.. I held on to her hands and said, "I'm yours forever.." Kissing her softly in my room.. Suddenly.. Leaves are tapping down the window She stopped kissing me and said, "It was just the leaves." I said, "It's God blessing us from above." "Can you feel the angels, they're watching us." We were still gazing outside the window.. The sun starts to sink in the horizon.. I whispered, "I love you, You're my only one." Tears run down her face.. And she held her arms around me.. I whispered, "Your eyes are the window to your heart.. "And your tears are a proof that you have one." "God gave us two feet, two hands, two ears and two eyes.." But only one heart.. I came closer to her and said.. "Because God knows that I will find the other piece in your heart" |
2007-07-12 | 2008-03-08 | 117411 | 128 | 2018-02-27 02:25:26 | Baine Willows | at 2008-10-12 | This is lovely. Truly good work, I enjoyed reading it. |
129 | 26 | 2018-02-27 02:25:26 | The Missing Piece of my Heart | Marc Ortiz | 2007-07-12 | 4.8 | 84 | Do you remember your first special kiss? That one sweet kiss melted your beautiful soul. Do you long for that kiss to happen again? Close your eyes, picture that moment in time.. I remember the moment before our lips met, Her eyes gazed to mine, our lips just an inch away.. I held on to her hands and said, "I'm yours forever.." Kissing her softly in my room.. Suddenly.. Leaves are tapping down the window She stopped kissing me and said, "It was just the leaves." I said, "It's God blessing us from above." "Can you feel the angels, they're watching us." We were still gazing outside the window.. The sun starts to sink in the horizon.. I whispered, "I love you, You're my only one." Tears run down her face.. And she held her arms around me.. I whispered, "Your eyes are the window to your heart.. "And your tears are a proof that you have one." "God gave us two feet, two hands, two ears and two eyes.." But only one heart.. I came closer to her and said.. "Because God knows that I will find the other piece in your heart" |
2007-07-12 | 2008-03-08 | 117411 | 129 | 2018-02-27 02:25:26 | Ready To Give Up | ( F P C ) at 2009-01-05 | Awww this was magnificent. Really sweet! and well written, excellent job 5/5 |
130 | 26 | 2018-02-27 02:25:26 | The Missing Piece of my Heart | Marc Ortiz | 2007-07-12 | 4.8 | 84 | Do you remember your first special kiss? That one sweet kiss melted your beautiful soul. Do you long for that kiss to happen again? Close your eyes, picture that moment in time.. I remember the moment before our lips met, Her eyes gazed to mine, our lips just an inch away.. I held on to her hands and said, "I'm yours forever.." Kissing her softly in my room.. Suddenly.. Leaves are tapping down the window She stopped kissing me and said, "It was just the leaves." I said, "It's God blessing us from above." "Can you feel the angels, they're watching us." We were still gazing outside the window.. The sun starts to sink in the horizon.. I whispered, "I love you, You're my only one." Tears run down her face.. And she held her arms around me.. I whispered, "Your eyes are the window to your heart.. "And your tears are a proof that you have one." "God gave us two feet, two hands, two ears and two eyes.." But only one heart.. I came closer to her and said.. "Because God knows that I will find the other piece in your heart" |
2007-07-12 | 2008-03-08 | 117411 | 130 | 2018-02-27 04:03:11 | IdTakeABulletForYou | ( F P C D ) at 2016-06-04 | A terrible poem -_- Thank you for taking the time to read it, though. I just made a few small changes, seeing as I haven't read the poem in years. That's the problem I find in going back and reading my previous works: I find so many errors that I end up tempted to just rewrite the whole damn things! I suppose it's a testament to how much I've changed over the years, and with that I thank you for reading despite that change and being honest about it as well! V/r IdTakeABulletForYou |
131 | 27 | 2018-02-27 02:25:30 | Much Too Late | Hollymariee | 2008-08-21 | 4.7 | 39 | Tell me lies and call me names When you need I'm here to blame Ignore me during my times of need Live your life the way you please Drink until you cannot stand Refuse to let me hold your hand When I need you, don't be there Just act as if you do not care Make those promises you cannot keep Hide those secrets that haunt my sleep Sneak around and "forget" to call Cut me down and watch me fall Make us seem like a big mistake But there's only so much a girl can take You never thought I was good enough You sure miss me now; But that's just tough Before you did the things above Should've known your life without my love Now you'll spend your life trying to find Everything that you've left behind For once boy, you'll cry real tears While you reminisce on the past two years But it's much too late to make things okay Because it's in his arms I want to stay <3 |
2008-08-21 | 2008-08-22 | 12947 | 131 | 2018-02-27 02:25:30 | Marc Ortiz | ( F P C D ) at 2008-11-08 | It was an excellent poem. But I think it would be better if you put it into stanzas. Well, maybe its just me but I don't like 1 stanza poems. Suggestion: Because it's in his arms I want to stay ^ Put this in it's own stanza. In my opinion it adds impact to the readers. Anyway I think it flowed very well. I'm guessing that you wrote this with your heart. Good job. I love poems that are written from the heart. Because in my opinion (poems that are written from the heart are always the best.) |
132 | 27 | 2018-02-27 02:25:30 | Much Too Late | Hollymariee | 2008-08-21 | 4.7 | 39 | Tell me lies and call me names When you need I'm here to blame Ignore me during my times of need Live your life the way you please Drink until you cannot stand Refuse to let me hold your hand When I need you, don't be there Just act as if you do not care Make those promises you cannot keep Hide those secrets that haunt my sleep Sneak around and "forget" to call Cut me down and watch me fall Make us seem like a big mistake But there's only so much a girl can take You never thought I was good enough You sure miss me now; But that's just tough Before you did the things above Should've known your life without my love Now you'll spend your life trying to find Everything that you've left behind For once boy, you'll cry real tears While you reminisce on the past two years But it's much too late to make things okay Because it's in his arms I want to stay <3 |
2008-08-21 | 2008-08-22 | 12947 | 132 | 2018-02-27 02:25:30 | Heartbroken And Outspoken | ( F C D ) at 2008-11-23 | Everything was amazing but maybe its just me but the second last line sorta sounded off. i dont really know what you should wrte but it seemed.... wrong somehow. anywho amazing poem. 4.8/5 ~KM~ |
133 | 27 | 2018-02-27 02:25:30 | Much Too Late | Hollymariee | 2008-08-21 | 4.7 | 39 | Tell me lies and call me names When you need I'm here to blame Ignore me during my times of need Live your life the way you please Drink until you cannot stand Refuse to let me hold your hand When I need you, don't be there Just act as if you do not care Make those promises you cannot keep Hide those secrets that haunt my sleep Sneak around and "forget" to call Cut me down and watch me fall Make us seem like a big mistake But there's only so much a girl can take You never thought I was good enough You sure miss me now; But that's just tough Before you did the things above Should've known your life without my love Now you'll spend your life trying to find Everything that you've left behind For once boy, you'll cry real tears While you reminisce on the past two years But it's much too late to make things okay Because it's in his arms I want to stay <3 |
2008-08-21 | 2008-08-22 | 12947 | 133 | 2018-02-27 02:37:09 | DreamingOutLoud | ( F C ) at 2008-11-29 | Wow, this poem is beautiful. |
134 | 27 | 2018-02-27 02:25:30 | Much Too Late | Hollymariee | 2008-08-21 | 4.7 | 39 | Tell me lies and call me names When you need I'm here to blame Ignore me during my times of need Live your life the way you please Drink until you cannot stand Refuse to let me hold your hand When I need you, don't be there Just act as if you do not care Make those promises you cannot keep Hide those secrets that haunt my sleep Sneak around and "forget" to call Cut me down and watch me fall Make us seem like a big mistake But there's only so much a girl can take You never thought I was good enough You sure miss me now; But that's just tough Before you did the things above Should've known your life without my love Now you'll spend your life trying to find Everything that you've left behind For once boy, you'll cry real tears While you reminisce on the past two years But it's much too late to make things okay Because it's in his arms I want to stay <3 |
2008-08-21 | 2008-08-22 | 12947 | 134 | 2018-02-27 02:25:30 | emotional wreck | ( F C D ) at 2009-02-26 | I love this one i really know you how you feel ive been through that more than once you are letting out so much in this poem great, no excellent job 5/5!!!! |
135 | 27 | 2018-02-27 02:25:30 | Much Too Late | Hollymariee | 2008-08-21 | 4.7 | 39 | Tell me lies and call me names When you need I'm here to blame Ignore me during my times of need Live your life the way you please Drink until you cannot stand Refuse to let me hold your hand When I need you, don't be there Just act as if you do not care Make those promises you cannot keep Hide those secrets that haunt my sleep Sneak around and "forget" to call Cut me down and watch me fall Make us seem like a big mistake But there's only so much a girl can take You never thought I was good enough You sure miss me now; But that's just tough Before you did the things above Should've known your life without my love Now you'll spend your life trying to find Everything that you've left behind For once boy, you'll cry real tears While you reminisce on the past two years But it's much too late to make things okay Because it's in his arms I want to stay <3 |
2008-08-21 | 2008-08-22 | 12947 | 135 | 2018-02-27 02:33:21 | I love my Guy | ( F P C D ) at 2009-04-29 | Wow. I think this one was my favorite. I loved everything about this one. The imagery is amazing. I love the style as well. This one really covers alot about relationships..with real original emotions. You should write more like this. This one is one of your best..no doubt. Shanik |
136 | 28 | 2018-02-27 02:25:35 | Look Away | TinyDancer46 | 2007-05-25 | 5.0 | 25 | Look away Act as if it isn't killing you Ignore the words That are tearing out your soul... Show that fake smile And act as though tears aren't Forming behind your eyes... Let the truth haunt your mind As a lie escapes your lips Pretend for a moment That all is okay That nothing is wrong And then maybe, just maybe... If you pretend long enough... You'll actually believe it | 2007-05-25 | 11506 | 136 | 2018-02-27 02:25:35 | jessica | at 2008-06-22 | I love all the poems you write there asome LOVE IT | |
137 | 28 | 2018-02-27 02:25:35 | Look Away | TinyDancer46 | 2007-05-25 | 5.0 | 25 | Look away Act as if it isn't killing you Ignore the words That are tearing out your soul... Show that fake smile And act as though tears aren't Forming behind your eyes... Let the truth haunt your mind As a lie escapes your lips Pretend for a moment That all is okay That nothing is wrong And then maybe, just maybe... If you pretend long enough... You'll actually believe it | 2007-05-25 | 11506 | 137 | 2018-02-27 02:25:35 | Carrotgirl | ( F C D ) at 2008-08-22 | A poem for everyone who has been in love or infatuated with someone, nice theme not overdone skillfully written | |
138 | 28 | 2018-02-27 02:25:35 | Look Away | TinyDancer46 | 2007-05-25 | 5.0 | 25 | Look away Act as if it isn't killing you Ignore the words That are tearing out your soul... Show that fake smile And act as though tears aren't Forming behind your eyes... Let the truth haunt your mind As a lie escapes your lips Pretend for a moment That all is okay That nothing is wrong And then maybe, just maybe... If you pretend long enough... You'll actually believe it | 2007-05-25 | 11506 | 138 | 2018-02-27 02:25:35 | tyme2change | at 2008-09-20 | I love love LOVE this poem!! im actually going through something that can relate to this 100%...Thank you for sharing and keep up the good work! | |
139 | 28 | 2018-02-27 02:25:35 | Look Away | TinyDancer46 | 2007-05-25 | 5.0 | 25 | Look away Act as if it isn't killing you Ignore the words That are tearing out your soul... Show that fake smile And act as though tears aren't Forming behind your eyes... Let the truth haunt your mind As a lie escapes your lips Pretend for a moment That all is okay That nothing is wrong And then maybe, just maybe... If you pretend long enough... You'll actually believe it | 2007-05-25 | 11506 | 139 | 2018-02-27 02:25:35 | I love Edward Cullen | ( F P C D ) at 2009-01-05 | I love this one just as much as I love every one of your poems(: | |
140 | 28 | 2018-02-27 02:25:35 | Look Away | TinyDancer46 | 2007-05-25 | 5.0 | 25 | Look away Act as if it isn't killing you Ignore the words That are tearing out your soul... Show that fake smile And act as though tears aren't Forming behind your eyes... Let the truth haunt your mind As a lie escapes your lips Pretend for a moment That all is okay That nothing is wrong And then maybe, just maybe... If you pretend long enough... You'll actually believe it | 2007-05-25 | 11506 | 140 | 2018-02-27 02:25:35 | Taylor Badger | at 2009-01-24 | Wow, just wow. you are such an amazing write. i loved it. | |
141 | 29 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | Why Do I Still Love You | Kali | 2004-12-25 | 4.7 | 169 | Everythings so silent I cant hear a voice So many feelings I dont have a choice Crying so softly So I cant be heard Everythings so confusing Every little word So many nights Where I cant sleep Dreaming of how much You mean to me Asking myself Is this how I feel Closing my eyes On everything real Wishing and praying Wanting to know Why I care for you Why cant I let go? Eyes filled with the tears Heart filled with the fears Mind so confused Why do I still love you? Everyones told me I cant feel this way You told me goodbye Yet I need you to stay Standing in place For such a long time I cant figure out Why I want you to be mine Youve broken my heart And left me to cry I feel so useless But I cant say goodbye |
2004-12-25 | 2007-04-15 | 31855 | 141 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | Jalisa | at 2005-01-01 | Girl I know just how you feel all you have to do is just deal with it if it is meant to be he will find his way back to you."keep yo head up" |
142 | 29 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | Why Do I Still Love You | Kali | 2004-12-25 | 4.7 | 169 | Everythings so silent I cant hear a voice So many feelings I dont have a choice Crying so softly So I cant be heard Everythings so confusing Every little word So many nights Where I cant sleep Dreaming of how much You mean to me Asking myself Is this how I feel Closing my eyes On everything real Wishing and praying Wanting to know Why I care for you Why cant I let go? Eyes filled with the tears Heart filled with the fears Mind so confused Why do I still love you? Everyones told me I cant feel this way You told me goodbye Yet I need you to stay Standing in place For such a long time I cant figure out Why I want you to be mine Youve broken my heart And left me to cry I feel so useless But I cant say goodbye |
2004-12-25 | 2007-04-15 | 31855 | 142 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | Miranda Grose | at 2005-01-01 | WOW! That was the best poem I have read all night, well in a very long time. It was like u wrote all of my feelings down. Haha it was a great poem, I loved it! ~*~Miranda~*~ |
143 | 29 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | Why Do I Still Love You | Kali | 2004-12-25 | 4.7 | 169 | Everythings so silent I cant hear a voice So many feelings I dont have a choice Crying so softly So I cant be heard Everythings so confusing Every little word So many nights Where I cant sleep Dreaming of how much You mean to me Asking myself Is this how I feel Closing my eyes On everything real Wishing and praying Wanting to know Why I care for you Why cant I let go? Eyes filled with the tears Heart filled with the fears Mind so confused Why do I still love you? Everyones told me I cant feel this way You told me goodbye Yet I need you to stay Standing in place For such a long time I cant figure out Why I want you to be mine Youve broken my heart And left me to cry I feel so useless But I cant say goodbye |
2004-12-25 | 2007-04-15 | 31855 | 143 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | MiCHELLE | at 2005-02-04 | this is such a great poem. i can totally relate. |
144 | 29 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | Why Do I Still Love You | Kali | 2004-12-25 | 4.7 | 169 | Everythings so silent I cant hear a voice So many feelings I dont have a choice Crying so softly So I cant be heard Everythings so confusing Every little word So many nights Where I cant sleep Dreaming of how much You mean to me Asking myself Is this how I feel Closing my eyes On everything real Wishing and praying Wanting to know Why I care for you Why cant I let go? Eyes filled with the tears Heart filled with the fears Mind so confused Why do I still love you? Everyones told me I cant feel this way You told me goodbye Yet I need you to stay Standing in place For such a long time I cant figure out Why I want you to be mine Youve broken my heart And left me to cry I feel so useless But I cant say goodbye |
2004-12-25 | 2007-04-15 | 31855 | 144 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | heather | at 2005-11-04 | YES! awsome!! I LOVE IT |
145 | 29 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | Why Do I Still Love You | Kali | 2004-12-25 | 4.7 | 169 | Everythings so silent I cant hear a voice So many feelings I dont have a choice Crying so softly So I cant be heard Everythings so confusing Every little word So many nights Where I cant sleep Dreaming of how much You mean to me Asking myself Is this how I feel Closing my eyes On everything real Wishing and praying Wanting to know Why I care for you Why cant I let go? Eyes filled with the tears Heart filled with the fears Mind so confused Why do I still love you? Everyones told me I cant feel this way You told me goodbye Yet I need you to stay Standing in place For such a long time I cant figure out Why I want you to be mine Youve broken my heart And left me to cry I feel so useless But I cant say goodbye |
2004-12-25 | 2007-04-15 | 31855 | 145 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | kayla T | ( F P C ) at 2007-01-25 | This is really good ! keep it up! |
146 | 30 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | Dedicated to every girl in the world | Hope Bound Heart | 2004-07-27 | 4.6 | 314 | Treat her like shes more than you want.. more than you could ever dream.. and more than she thinks she is... like shes everything youve ever wanted.. make sure you speak to her sweeter and love her deeper be true and be kind shes more than just a girl... shes and angel without wings, shes the sweetest thing in the world, and is more precious than a thousand roses.. girls Never frown because you never know When someone is falling In love with your smile, let her know you care let her know by doing something special for her call her everynight just to make sure everthings alright and to remind her you still care..always wish her the sweetest dreams... when she cries let your shoulder be the first she rests her head upon, and cry with her, letting her know shes not alone, when she laughs let you be the first to hear her, when shes down help her laugh but most of all guys...when you tell her you love her let her see the tears in your eyes.................. |
2004-07-27 | 2007-05-01 | 43987 | 146 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | Lil Ally Kat | ( F P C D ) at 2008-06-10 | Man this is da most SWEETEST poewm a guy could ever, and I mean EVER write for a girl!!! Its wonderful n beautiful!!! 10/10 |
147 | 30 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | Dedicated to every girl in the world | Hope Bound Heart | 2004-07-27 | 4.6 | 314 | Treat her like shes more than you want.. more than you could ever dream.. and more than she thinks she is... like shes everything youve ever wanted.. make sure you speak to her sweeter and love her deeper be true and be kind shes more than just a girl... shes and angel without wings, shes the sweetest thing in the world, and is more precious than a thousand roses.. girls Never frown because you never know When someone is falling In love with your smile, let her know you care let her know by doing something special for her call her everynight just to make sure everthings alright and to remind her you still care..always wish her the sweetest dreams... when she cries let your shoulder be the first she rests her head upon, and cry with her, letting her know shes not alone, when she laughs let you be the first to hear her, when shes down help her laugh but most of all guys...when you tell her you love her let her see the tears in your eyes.................. |
2004-07-27 | 2007-05-01 | 43987 | 147 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | maryann | at 2008-10-05 | Ur just being a cheeky boi ayy lool good poem=] |
148 | 30 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | Dedicated to every girl in the world | Hope Bound Heart | 2004-07-27 | 4.6 | 314 | Treat her like shes more than you want.. more than you could ever dream.. and more than she thinks she is... like shes everything youve ever wanted.. make sure you speak to her sweeter and love her deeper be true and be kind shes more than just a girl... shes and angel without wings, shes the sweetest thing in the world, and is more precious than a thousand roses.. girls Never frown because you never know When someone is falling In love with your smile, let her know you care let her know by doing something special for her call her everynight just to make sure everthings alright and to remind her you still care..always wish her the sweetest dreams... when she cries let your shoulder be the first she rests her head upon, and cry with her, letting her know shes not alone, when she laughs let you be the first to hear her, when shes down help her laugh but most of all guys...when you tell her you love her let her see the tears in your eyes.................. |
2004-07-27 | 2007-05-01 | 43987 | 148 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | Miranda | ( P ) at 2011-08-01 | Breath taking nice work |
150 | 30 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | Dedicated to every girl in the world | Hope Bound Heart | 2004-07-27 | 4.6 | 314 | Treat her like shes more than you want.. more than you could ever dream.. and more than she thinks she is... like shes everything youve ever wanted.. make sure you speak to her sweeter and love her deeper be true and be kind shes more than just a girl... shes and angel without wings, shes the sweetest thing in the world, and is more precious than a thousand roses.. girls Never frown because you never know When someone is falling In love with your smile, let her know you care let her know by doing something special for her call her everynight just to make sure everthings alright and to remind her you still care..always wish her the sweetest dreams... when she cries let your shoulder be the first she rests her head upon, and cry with her, letting her know shes not alone, when she laughs let you be the first to hear her, when shes down help her laugh but most of all guys...when you tell her you love her let her see the tears in your eyes.................. |
2004-07-27 | 2007-05-01 | 43987 | 150 | 2018-02-27 02:25:37 | The New Girl | at 2011-12-06 | This is amazing. You nailed it. I don't know a single girl wo wouldn't want a guy to treat her like this. |
151 | 31 | 2018-02-27 02:25:39 | Tears on a Keyboard | Karl Wild GG23 | 2007-05-24 | 4.9 | 48 | As she reads the words he wrote, Her teardrops fall like rain, A lump forms in her throat, Her world is filled with pain. She tries to read them clearly, But her eyes begin to swell, He says he loves her dearly, It's just time to say farewell. He knows exactly what's in her heart, That her love for him is surely true, He doesn't want for them to part, But feels there's nothing he can do. "Forever and always you'll be my baby, I'll never let another girl take that away, In another life this would work out, maybe, I'll think of that precious smile, everyday." As her teardrops hit the keyboard, She's not prepared to let him go, His love for her, was it's own reward, Signed always and forever, X and O. |
2007-05-24 | 2007-05-24 | 9801 | 151 | 2018-02-27 02:37:23 | me just you | ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-15 | Wow i really really could relate to this...it hurt to think about it but you did such a good job with this poem 5/5 |
152 | 31 | 2018-02-27 02:25:39 | Tears on a Keyboard | Karl Wild GG23 | 2007-05-24 | 4.9 | 48 | As she reads the words he wrote, Her teardrops fall like rain, A lump forms in her throat, Her world is filled with pain. She tries to read them clearly, But her eyes begin to swell, He says he loves her dearly, It's just time to say farewell. He knows exactly what's in her heart, That her love for him is surely true, He doesn't want for them to part, But feels there's nothing he can do. "Forever and always you'll be my baby, I'll never let another girl take that away, In another life this would work out, maybe, I'll think of that precious smile, everyday." As her teardrops hit the keyboard, She's not prepared to let him go, His love for her, was it's own reward, Signed always and forever, X and O. |
2007-05-24 | 2007-05-24 | 9801 | 152 | 2018-02-27 02:25:39 | Brandy | at 2008-03-27 | Wow. Thats all i can say........wow! This poem was simply A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. I could really feel the emotion of this poem. I absolutely L-O-V-E-D it. Keep it up. ~Brandy~ |
153 | 31 | 2018-02-27 02:25:39 | Tears on a Keyboard | Karl Wild GG23 | 2007-05-24 | 4.9 | 48 | As she reads the words he wrote, Her teardrops fall like rain, A lump forms in her throat, Her world is filled with pain. She tries to read them clearly, But her eyes begin to swell, He says he loves her dearly, It's just time to say farewell. He knows exactly what's in her heart, That her love for him is surely true, He doesn't want for them to part, But feels there's nothing he can do. "Forever and always you'll be my baby, I'll never let another girl take that away, In another life this would work out, maybe, I'll think of that precious smile, everyday." As her teardrops hit the keyboard, She's not prepared to let him go, His love for her, was it's own reward, Signed always and forever, X and O. |
2007-05-24 | 2007-05-24 | 9801 | 153 | 2018-02-27 02:25:39 | Hayley | at 2008-04-27 | This is one of the better poems I've ever read. I think the rhyming is phenominal and the rhythm was great. This one hits home. |
154 | 31 | 2018-02-27 02:25:39 | Tears on a Keyboard | Karl Wild GG23 | 2007-05-24 | 4.9 | 48 | As she reads the words he wrote, Her teardrops fall like rain, A lump forms in her throat, Her world is filled with pain. She tries to read them clearly, But her eyes begin to swell, He says he loves her dearly, It's just time to say farewell. He knows exactly what's in her heart, That her love for him is surely true, He doesn't want for them to part, But feels there's nothing he can do. "Forever and always you'll be my baby, I'll never let another girl take that away, In another life this would work out, maybe, I'll think of that precious smile, everyday." As her teardrops hit the keyboard, She's not prepared to let him go, His love for her, was it's own reward, Signed always and forever, X and O. |
2007-05-24 | 2007-05-24 | 9801 | 154 | 2018-02-27 02:25:39 | A5hl3igh | at 2008-06-02 | That was beautiful, i related to it so much! Truly inspiring! xx |
155 | 31 | 2018-02-27 02:25:39 | Tears on a Keyboard | Karl Wild GG23 | 2007-05-24 | 4.9 | 48 | As she reads the words he wrote, Her teardrops fall like rain, A lump forms in her throat, Her world is filled with pain. She tries to read them clearly, But her eyes begin to swell, He says he loves her dearly, It's just time to say farewell. He knows exactly what's in her heart, That her love for him is surely true, He doesn't want for them to part, But feels there's nothing he can do. "Forever and always you'll be my baby, I'll never let another girl take that away, In another life this would work out, maybe, I'll think of that precious smile, everyday." As her teardrops hit the keyboard, She's not prepared to let him go, His love for her, was it's own reward, Signed always and forever, X and O. |
2007-05-24 | 2007-05-24 | 9801 | 155 | 2018-02-27 02:25:39 | Nikoshiana | ( F P C ) at 2008-08-24 | Extremly touching, ifelt every word, having nce been in the same situation as said girl, brought a tear, again, still, to my eye. great write |
156 | 32 | 2018-02-27 02:25:44 | What it is to live | Jacqui Armstrong | 2005-01-07 | 4.9 | 74 | He walked through the door a tear in his eye He lifted his sleeve and wiped it dry He took a deep breath and stepped into the room He closed his eyes he saw the gloom She was there so very quiet and still She seemed as though she was never ill He slowly walked closer to her The few weeks before became a blur He reached out for her small white hand Held it tight but could not understand He took his ring placed it on her chain Took his sleeve and wiped his eyes again He slowly sat on the small white chair Put out his hand and touched her hair So perfect and blonde so long and neat Without you I am incomplete He whispered, I love you in her ear Although you're gone you're always here And at that moment his hand moved from her hair To his heart you're always there He slowly stood up and again took her hand Things were clear he could now understand Even if she wasn't there with him Inside his heart could never be dim He placed her hand down by her side Her imprint she left so deep inside For the last time he softly kissed her Still her body did not stir He turned to walk toward the door Then turned back to look once more Her new small ring shone in the light He closed the door she had lost her fight And as surely as he said that day In his heart she will always stay © Jacqui Armstrong * i have dedicated this poem to one of my friends who's girlfriend he lost to cancer* |
2005-01-07 | 2007-09-21 | 223478 | 156 | 2018-02-27 02:25:44 | Nz0 | ( F C D ) at 2008-06-24 | Well its this is a loveyl poem, ur friend has my condolences. but this really was a very well written piece of poerty. sad but magnificent. |
157 | 32 | 2018-02-27 02:25:44 | What it is to live | Jacqui Armstrong | 2005-01-07 | 4.9 | 74 | He walked through the door a tear in his eye He lifted his sleeve and wiped it dry He took a deep breath and stepped into the room He closed his eyes he saw the gloom She was there so very quiet and still She seemed as though she was never ill He slowly walked closer to her The few weeks before became a blur He reached out for her small white hand Held it tight but could not understand He took his ring placed it on her chain Took his sleeve and wiped his eyes again He slowly sat on the small white chair Put out his hand and touched her hair So perfect and blonde so long and neat Without you I am incomplete He whispered, I love you in her ear Although you're gone you're always here And at that moment his hand moved from her hair To his heart you're always there He slowly stood up and again took her hand Things were clear he could now understand Even if she wasn't there with him Inside his heart could never be dim He placed her hand down by her side Her imprint she left so deep inside For the last time he softly kissed her Still her body did not stir He turned to walk toward the door Then turned back to look once more Her new small ring shone in the light He closed the door she had lost her fight And as surely as he said that day In his heart she will always stay © Jacqui Armstrong * i have dedicated this poem to one of my friends who's girlfriend he lost to cancer* |
2005-01-07 | 2007-09-21 | 223478 | 157 | 2018-02-27 02:25:44 | Brian n Josh | ( F P C D ) at 2008-10-05 | Beautiful poem, a story-line aspect to it with powerful imagery, very moving. |
158 | 32 | 2018-02-27 02:25:44 | What it is to live | Jacqui Armstrong | 2005-01-07 | 4.9 | 74 | He walked through the door a tear in his eye He lifted his sleeve and wiped it dry He took a deep breath and stepped into the room He closed his eyes he saw the gloom She was there so very quiet and still She seemed as though she was never ill He slowly walked closer to her The few weeks before became a blur He reached out for her small white hand Held it tight but could not understand He took his ring placed it on her chain Took his sleeve and wiped his eyes again He slowly sat on the small white chair Put out his hand and touched her hair So perfect and blonde so long and neat Without you I am incomplete He whispered, I love you in her ear Although you're gone you're always here And at that moment his hand moved from her hair To his heart you're always there He slowly stood up and again took her hand Things were clear he could now understand Even if she wasn't there with him Inside his heart could never be dim He placed her hand down by her side Her imprint she left so deep inside For the last time he softly kissed her Still her body did not stir He turned to walk toward the door Then turned back to look once more Her new small ring shone in the light He closed the door she had lost her fight And as surely as he said that day In his heart she will always stay © Jacqui Armstrong * i have dedicated this poem to one of my friends who's girlfriend he lost to cancer* |
2005-01-07 | 2007-09-21 | 223478 | 158 | 2018-02-27 02:25:44 | marinesprincess | ( F P C ) at 2009-04-15 | Amazing poem. i loved it. it was very deep and shown the true feelings. made my eyes teary. |
159 | 32 | 2018-02-27 02:25:44 | What it is to live | Jacqui Armstrong | 2005-01-07 | 4.9 | 74 | He walked through the door a tear in his eye He lifted his sleeve and wiped it dry He took a deep breath and stepped into the room He closed his eyes he saw the gloom She was there so very quiet and still She seemed as though she was never ill He slowly walked closer to her The few weeks before became a blur He reached out for her small white hand Held it tight but could not understand He took his ring placed it on her chain Took his sleeve and wiped his eyes again He slowly sat on the small white chair Put out his hand and touched her hair So perfect and blonde so long and neat Without you I am incomplete He whispered, I love you in her ear Although you're gone you're always here And at that moment his hand moved from her hair To his heart you're always there He slowly stood up and again took her hand Things were clear he could now understand Even if she wasn't there with him Inside his heart could never be dim He placed her hand down by her side Her imprint she left so deep inside For the last time he softly kissed her Still her body did not stir He turned to walk toward the door Then turned back to look once more Her new small ring shone in the light He closed the door she had lost her fight And as surely as he said that day In his heart she will always stay © Jacqui Armstrong * i have dedicated this poem to one of my friends who's girlfriend he lost to cancer* |
2005-01-07 | 2007-09-21 | 223478 | 159 | 2018-02-27 02:25:44 | Empty One | at 2009-04-20 | This is one of the most beautiful poems i have read in a long time, i can relate to this poem, because i my self have cancer |
160 | 32 | 2018-02-27 02:25:44 | What it is to live | Jacqui Armstrong | 2005-01-07 | 4.9 | 74 | He walked through the door a tear in his eye He lifted his sleeve and wiped it dry He took a deep breath and stepped into the room He closed his eyes he saw the gloom She was there so very quiet and still She seemed as though she was never ill He slowly walked closer to her The few weeks before became a blur He reached out for her small white hand Held it tight but could not understand He took his ring placed it on her chain Took his sleeve and wiped his eyes again He slowly sat on the small white chair Put out his hand and touched her hair So perfect and blonde so long and neat Without you I am incomplete He whispered, I love you in her ear Although you're gone you're always here And at that moment his hand moved from her hair To his heart you're always there He slowly stood up and again took her hand Things were clear he could now understand Even if she wasn't there with him Inside his heart could never be dim He placed her hand down by her side Her imprint she left so deep inside For the last time he softly kissed her Still her body did not stir He turned to walk toward the door Then turned back to look once more Her new small ring shone in the light He closed the door she had lost her fight And as surely as he said that day In his heart she will always stay © Jacqui Armstrong * i have dedicated this poem to one of my friends who's girlfriend he lost to cancer* |
2005-01-07 | 2007-09-21 | 223478 | 160 | 2018-02-27 02:25:44 | BraidhairCutie | ( C ) at 2009-10-22 | Sad and emotional yet touching.. |
161 | 33 | 2018-02-27 02:25:48 | I DO LOVE YOU SO I WILL LET YOU GO | noha | 2008-03-27 | 4.9 | 51 | To let Go...Doesn't mean to stop caring, it means I can't do it for someone else. Is not to cut myself off, Is the realization that I can't control another. To Let Go....Is not to enable, but to allow learning from natural consequences. Is to admit powerlessness, which means the outcome is not in my hands. To Let Go....Is not to try to change or blame another, I can only change myself. Is not to care for, but to care about. To let Go....Is not to fix, but to be supportive. Is not to judge, but to allow another to be a human being. To let Go....Is not to be in the middle arranging all the outcome, but to allow others to effect their own outcomes. Is not to be protective, it is to permit another to face reality. To Let Go....Is not to deny, but to accept. Is not to nag, scold, or argue, but to search out my own shortcomings and to correct them. To Let Go....Is not to adjust everything to my desires, but to take each day as it comes, and to cherish the moment. Is not to criticize or regulate anyone, but to try to become whatever dream I can be. To Let Go....Is not to regret the past, but to grow and live for the future. Is to fear less and to love more. And I do "LOVE YOU" So I will..."LET YOU GO"... |
2008-03-27 | 2008-05-03 | 19818 | 161 | 2018-02-27 02:25:48 | Italian Stallion | ( F P C D ) at 2008-05-05 | I liked the reputition of "To Let Go" it really held the poem together and gave it a deeper meaning as well as feeling. The flow of the poem was just ok for me, it could of been better, however; the overall structure was great. `````````` To let Go...Doesn't mean to stop caring, it means I can't do it for someone else. Is not to cut myself off, Is the realization that I can't control another. ^^A nice begining to the rest of the poem, gets the readers mood in the right spot to continue reading. `````````` To Let Go....Is not to enable, but to allow learning from natural consequences. Is to admit powerlessness, which means the outcome is not in my hands. ^^I really like this stanza, it really stood out to me for the simple fact that it is so true in many ways. `````````` To Let Go....Is not to try to change or blame another, I can only change myself. Is not to care for, but to care about. ^^Very vaild point you pointed out there, I hope many will read and fully understand the meaning behind this poem for it gives great insight about letting go. `````````` To let Go....Is not to fix, but to be supportive. Is not to judge, but to allow another to be a human being. ^^I feel like I keep saying the samething over and over, but I can't help it. This stanza shows the reader just how important it is to realize that one' has to let go and stop thinking of their selves all the time. `````````` To let Go....Is not to be in the middle arranging all the outcome, but to allow others to effect their own outcomes. Is not to be protective, it is to permit another to face reality. ^^Sometimes facing reality is hard to do, and by reading this stanza, one' can fully visualize and hopefully understand that the outcomes of not facing reality. `````````` To Let Go....Is not to deny, but to accept. Is not to nag, scold, or argue, but to search out my own shortcomings and to correct them. ^^Correction, is a must in many cases. Correcting yourself is one of the best tools one' can ever follow through with; by doing that hopefully the person will learn, and I always say, learning is the way to knowledge. `````````` To Let Go....Is not to adjust everything to my desires, but to take each day as it comes, and to cherish the moment. Is not to criticize or regulate anyone, but to try to become whatever dream I can be. ^^Oh this stanza reminds me of something I wrote a while back, and it is so true in so many perspectives. I'm a simple kind of man and I take life as it comes, I'm in no kind of rush, I just like to relax. Why can't a majority of the people these days understand relaxation? `````````` To Let Go....Is not to regret the past, but to grow and live for the future. Is to fear less and to love more. ^^Oh I liked this stanza, it shows such truth and many should follow what you are saying in this poem. `````````` And I do "LOVE YOU" ^^And I love you too...lol Really this is a nice little touch towards the end of the poem. `````````` So I will..."LET YOU GO"... ^^Great ending, shows that you care towards the other person enough to let them live their life the true way that they want. `````````` Nice write, keep up the great work. Peace, Joe |
162 | 33 | 2018-02-27 02:25:48 | I DO LOVE YOU SO I WILL LET YOU GO | noha | 2008-03-27 | 4.9 | 51 | To let Go...Doesn't mean to stop caring, it means I can't do it for someone else. Is not to cut myself off, Is the realization that I can't control another. To Let Go....Is not to enable, but to allow learning from natural consequences. Is to admit powerlessness, which means the outcome is not in my hands. To Let Go....Is not to try to change or blame another, I can only change myself. Is not to care for, but to care about. To let Go....Is not to fix, but to be supportive. Is not to judge, but to allow another to be a human being. To let Go....Is not to be in the middle arranging all the outcome, but to allow others to effect their own outcomes. Is not to be protective, it is to permit another to face reality. To Let Go....Is not to deny, but to accept. Is not to nag, scold, or argue, but to search out my own shortcomings and to correct them. To Let Go....Is not to adjust everything to my desires, but to take each day as it comes, and to cherish the moment. Is not to criticize or regulate anyone, but to try to become whatever dream I can be. To Let Go....Is not to regret the past, but to grow and live for the future. Is to fear less and to love more. And I do "LOVE YOU" So I will..."LET YOU GO"... |
2008-03-27 | 2008-05-03 | 19818 | 162 | 2018-02-27 02:25:48 | MILESTONE | at 2008-05-21 | Finest. i dont even have something constuctive to offer. just praises . well done 5/5 |
163 | 33 | 2018-02-27 02:25:48 | I DO LOVE YOU SO I WILL LET YOU GO | noha | 2008-03-27 | 4.9 | 51 | To let Go...Doesn't mean to stop caring, it means I can't do it for someone else. Is not to cut myself off, Is the realization that I can't control another. To Let Go....Is not to enable, but to allow learning from natural consequences. Is to admit powerlessness, which means the outcome is not in my hands. To Let Go....Is not to try to change or blame another, I can only change myself. Is not to care for, but to care about. To let Go....Is not to fix, but to be supportive. Is not to judge, but to allow another to be a human being. To let Go....Is not to be in the middle arranging all the outcome, but to allow others to effect their own outcomes. Is not to be protective, it is to permit another to face reality. To Let Go....Is not to deny, but to accept. Is not to nag, scold, or argue, but to search out my own shortcomings and to correct them. To Let Go....Is not to adjust everything to my desires, but to take each day as it comes, and to cherish the moment. Is not to criticize or regulate anyone, but to try to become whatever dream I can be. To Let Go....Is not to regret the past, but to grow and live for the future. Is to fear less and to love more. And I do "LOVE YOU" So I will..."LET YOU GO"... |
2008-03-27 | 2008-05-03 | 19818 | 163 | 2018-02-27 03:58:00 | bRoKen mIrrOr fAllen PeTals | ( F D ) at 2008-05-31 | It's a sad poem of love, I also felt that before.. great poem! |
164 | 33 | 2018-02-27 02:25:48 | I DO LOVE YOU SO I WILL LET YOU GO | noha | 2008-03-27 | 4.9 | 51 | To let Go...Doesn't mean to stop caring, it means I can't do it for someone else. Is not to cut myself off, Is the realization that I can't control another. To Let Go....Is not to enable, but to allow learning from natural consequences. Is to admit powerlessness, which means the outcome is not in my hands. To Let Go....Is not to try to change or blame another, I can only change myself. Is not to care for, but to care about. To let Go....Is not to fix, but to be supportive. Is not to judge, but to allow another to be a human being. To let Go....Is not to be in the middle arranging all the outcome, but to allow others to effect their own outcomes. Is not to be protective, it is to permit another to face reality. To Let Go....Is not to deny, but to accept. Is not to nag, scold, or argue, but to search out my own shortcomings and to correct them. To Let Go....Is not to adjust everything to my desires, but to take each day as it comes, and to cherish the moment. Is not to criticize or regulate anyone, but to try to become whatever dream I can be. To Let Go....Is not to regret the past, but to grow and live for the future. Is to fear less and to love more. And I do "LOVE YOU" So I will..."LET YOU GO"... |
2008-03-27 | 2008-05-03 | 19818 | 164 | 2018-02-27 03:29:53 | ICE f0rg0tTeNph0eNix | ( F P C D ) at 2008-06-04 | Among the poem you created i admire this one coz i can feel the intense emotions and with its simple ambiance and ideas you painted a perfect lonely poem.. great!! |
165 | 33 | 2018-02-27 02:25:48 | I DO LOVE YOU SO I WILL LET YOU GO | noha | 2008-03-27 | 4.9 | 51 | To let Go...Doesn't mean to stop caring, it means I can't do it for someone else. Is not to cut myself off, Is the realization that I can't control another. To Let Go....Is not to enable, but to allow learning from natural consequences. Is to admit powerlessness, which means the outcome is not in my hands. To Let Go....Is not to try to change or blame another, I can only change myself. Is not to care for, but to care about. To let Go....Is not to fix, but to be supportive. Is not to judge, but to allow another to be a human being. To let Go....Is not to be in the middle arranging all the outcome, but to allow others to effect their own outcomes. Is not to be protective, it is to permit another to face reality. To Let Go....Is not to deny, but to accept. Is not to nag, scold, or argue, but to search out my own shortcomings and to correct them. To Let Go....Is not to adjust everything to my desires, but to take each day as it comes, and to cherish the moment. Is not to criticize or regulate anyone, but to try to become whatever dream I can be. To Let Go....Is not to regret the past, but to grow and live for the future. Is to fear less and to love more. And I do "LOVE YOU" So I will..."LET YOU GO"... |
2008-03-27 | 2008-05-03 | 19818 | 165 | 2018-02-27 02:49:41 | BECCA lessTHANthree | ( F P C D ) at 2008-06-15 | Lovely poem. the emotion is so strong and the flow was PERFECT. great job 5/5 |
168 | 34 | 2018-02-27 02:25:50 | I Won't Give Up On Us Now | Toni | 2004-12-05 | 4.7 | 632 | It's two am, you're still on my mind These sleepless nights leave me behind So I sit here waiting for dawn to come Thinking of the amazing things you've done I know things haven't been good for a while I've shouted at you, taken away your soft smile Taking all my anger and problems out on you I've felt so bad I haven't known what to do Yet you took it all, didn't even retaliate Even when my head filled with anger and hate You stood there for me, right by my side You told me that I no longer had to hide Even when I made up excuses to fight You understood, helped me to see the light You had faith in me when others walked away You have stayed by me every single day Even when I told you to leave me alone You sat close to me, making your care known You listened to all my words of pain You promised me the future wouldn't be the same This week has been full of tears and strain I've been so tied up in my problems and pain I don't think I've told you enough how I feel How I live for you and my love is still real How you're the one and I still know this is true How if you left me now, I wouldn't know what to do Looking in your eyes, I know you're the one I still know that together is where we belong You make me feel safe; I've never felt that before When you touch me I can feel your love so pure I swear you're an angel sent from above You stand by me and show me your love You're the one I want, nobody else comes near The thought of losing you fills my heart with fear You're my first love and I know you'll be my last I could never leave our love in the past We have something so very special and rare Plus a future filled with love and care I'll stand by you whereever we will go All of this I wanted you to know I'm sorry for taking everything out on you You're the only thing that's helped me pull through Thankyou so much for all that you have done I won't give up on us now...we've only just begun Any comments would mean a lot! x |
2004-12-05 | 57886 | 123 | 2018-02-27 02:25:50 | asian babe | ( F C D ) at 2008-12-16 | I love it!!! Great poem! (: | |
166 | 34 | 2018-02-27 02:25:50 | I Won't Give Up On Us Now | Toni | 2004-12-05 | 4.7 | 632 | It's two am, you're still on my mind These sleepless nights leave me behind So I sit here waiting for dawn to come Thinking of the amazing things you've done I know things haven't been good for a while I've shouted at you, taken away your soft smile Taking all my anger and problems out on you I've felt so bad I haven't known what to do Yet you took it all, didn't even retaliate Even when my head filled with anger and hate You stood there for me, right by my side You told me that I no longer had to hide Even when I made up excuses to fight You understood, helped me to see the light You had faith in me when others walked away You have stayed by me every single day Even when I told you to leave me alone You sat close to me, making your care known You listened to all my words of pain You promised me the future wouldn't be the same This week has been full of tears and strain I've been so tied up in my problems and pain I don't think I've told you enough how I feel How I live for you and my love is still real How you're the one and I still know this is true How if you left me now, I wouldn't know what to do Looking in your eyes, I know you're the one I still know that together is where we belong You make me feel safe; I've never felt that before When you touch me I can feel your love so pure I swear you're an angel sent from above You stand by me and show me your love You're the one I want, nobody else comes near The thought of losing you fills my heart with fear You're my first love and I know you'll be my last I could never leave our love in the past We have something so very special and rare Plus a future filled with love and care I'll stand by you whereever we will go All of this I wanted you to know I'm sorry for taking everything out on you You're the only thing that's helped me pull through Thankyou so much for all that you have done I won't give up on us now...we've only just begun Any comments would mean a lot! x |
2004-12-05 | 57886 | 166 | 2018-02-27 02:25:50 | Love Fallacy | ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-03 | I really liked this piece. Really conveyed emotion . Keep up the good work. If you could, check out some of my work. I think you would really like it. Thank you and nice job. | |
167 | 34 | 2018-02-27 02:25:50 | I Won't Give Up On Us Now | Toni | 2004-12-05 | 4.7 | 632 | It's two am, you're still on my mind These sleepless nights leave me behind So I sit here waiting for dawn to come Thinking of the amazing things you've done I know things haven't been good for a while I've shouted at you, taken away your soft smile Taking all my anger and problems out on you I've felt so bad I haven't known what to do Yet you took it all, didn't even retaliate Even when my head filled with anger and hate You stood there for me, right by my side You told me that I no longer had to hide Even when I made up excuses to fight You understood, helped me to see the light You had faith in me when others walked away You have stayed by me every single day Even when I told you to leave me alone You sat close to me, making your care known You listened to all my words of pain You promised me the future wouldn't be the same This week has been full of tears and strain I've been so tied up in my problems and pain I don't think I've told you enough how I feel How I live for you and my love is still real How you're the one and I still know this is true How if you left me now, I wouldn't know what to do Looking in your eyes, I know you're the one I still know that together is where we belong You make me feel safe; I've never felt that before When you touch me I can feel your love so pure I swear you're an angel sent from above You stand by me and show me your love You're the one I want, nobody else comes near The thought of losing you fills my heart with fear You're my first love and I know you'll be my last I could never leave our love in the past We have something so very special and rare Plus a future filled with love and care I'll stand by you whereever we will go All of this I wanted you to know I'm sorry for taking everything out on you You're the only thing that's helped me pull through Thankyou so much for all that you have done I won't give up on us now...we've only just begun Any comments would mean a lot! x |
2004-12-05 | 57886 | 167 | 2018-02-27 02:25:50 | Christina | at 2007-11-21 | Wow this poem is awesome...It describes my marriage perfectly. Keep up the good work.. | |
169 | 34 | 2018-02-27 02:25:50 | I Won't Give Up On Us Now | Toni | 2004-12-05 | 4.7 | 632 | It's two am, you're still on my mind These sleepless nights leave me behind So I sit here waiting for dawn to come Thinking of the amazing things you've done I know things haven't been good for a while I've shouted at you, taken away your soft smile Taking all my anger and problems out on you I've felt so bad I haven't known what to do Yet you took it all, didn't even retaliate Even when my head filled with anger and hate You stood there for me, right by my side You told me that I no longer had to hide Even when I made up excuses to fight You understood, helped me to see the light You had faith in me when others walked away You have stayed by me every single day Even when I told you to leave me alone You sat close to me, making your care known You listened to all my words of pain You promised me the future wouldn't be the same This week has been full of tears and strain I've been so tied up in my problems and pain I don't think I've told you enough how I feel How I live for you and my love is still real How you're the one and I still know this is true How if you left me now, I wouldn't know what to do Looking in your eyes, I know you're the one I still know that together is where we belong You make me feel safe; I've never felt that before When you touch me I can feel your love so pure I swear you're an angel sent from above You stand by me and show me your love You're the one I want, nobody else comes near The thought of losing you fills my heart with fear You're my first love and I know you'll be my last I could never leave our love in the past We have something so very special and rare Plus a future filled with love and care I'll stand by you whereever we will go All of this I wanted you to know I'm sorry for taking everything out on you You're the only thing that's helped me pull through Thankyou so much for all that you have done I won't give up on us now...we've only just begun Any comments would mean a lot! x |
2004-12-05 | 57886 | 169 | 2018-02-27 02:25:50 | StarlingShadow | at 2011-08-06 | I can relate to this poem so much which makes me love it even more. you're so talented. keep up the qreat work :) | |
170 | 34 | 2018-02-27 02:25:50 | I Won't Give Up On Us Now | Toni | 2004-12-05 | 4.7 | 632 | It's two am, you're still on my mind These sleepless nights leave me behind So I sit here waiting for dawn to come Thinking of the amazing things you've done I know things haven't been good for a while I've shouted at you, taken away your soft smile Taking all my anger and problems out on you I've felt so bad I haven't known what to do Yet you took it all, didn't even retaliate Even when my head filled with anger and hate You stood there for me, right by my side You told me that I no longer had to hide Even when I made up excuses to fight You understood, helped me to see the light You had faith in me when others walked away You have stayed by me every single day Even when I told you to leave me alone You sat close to me, making your care known You listened to all my words of pain You promised me the future wouldn't be the same This week has been full of tears and strain I've been so tied up in my problems and pain I don't think I've told you enough how I feel How I live for you and my love is still real How you're the one and I still know this is true How if you left me now, I wouldn't know what to do Looking in your eyes, I know you're the one I still know that together is where we belong You make me feel safe; I've never felt that before When you touch me I can feel your love so pure I swear you're an angel sent from above You stand by me and show me your love You're the one I want, nobody else comes near The thought of losing you fills my heart with fear You're my first love and I know you'll be my last I could never leave our love in the past We have something so very special and rare Plus a future filled with love and care I'll stand by you whereever we will go All of this I wanted you to know I'm sorry for taking everything out on you You're the only thing that's helped me pull through Thankyou so much for all that you have done I won't give up on us now...we've only just begun Any comments would mean a lot! x |
2004-12-05 | 57886 | 170 | 2018-02-27 02:25:50 | Sherry Wilson | at 2015-03-04 | Its like you took the words of how I feel for my man right out of my heart and put them on paper... This is a very very touching and moving poem. I had tears in my eyes by the time i finished reading it. | |
171 | 35 | 2018-02-27 02:25:54 | Remain miles apart. | BlueDreams | 2007-08-02 | 5.0 | 32 | Life is getting very bleak I don't think I will find the love I seek The future is seemingly black and I know there is no going back. The chances for success are becoming less and less I have poured out my soul and heart we still remain miles apart. I have exposed the real me for very few to see They will not forget I will probably regret. All I have to offer is me not enough I see My love, heart, help and desire not enough to light anyone's fire Feeling less amused, but totally confused I have lost, so I must let her be there is nothing else to do, I see. But my love for her is so deep it even robs me of sleep I am in so much emotional pain maybe a blade deep into a vein. No, its the way out of the cheat its not me, its not neat To myself I must confess, not leave others to clean up the mess. In the world you can only help a few I only wanted to give her a life that was true There is a lot more to her than meets the eye but she is caged and not allowed to fly. Her potential has no bounds she needs to hear the right sounds Now I see, they are not destined to come from me I've tried my best, can't keep up with the rest. My love she will deny so I may just curl up and die I will push no more, just close the door Hide in obscurity, never again seek purity My last wish from this mess, is that she find love and total success I should have known, as a mere male I was destined to fail. I know that seclusion is a must I must admit it is her I still love and trust Like a sister or best friend, I had hoped it would be until the end Wrong again, I must have been insane Time to let her go, never to let my inner self show Its too much of an emotional drain, impossible pain Never, never, never again. Time to allow myself to grow old forever staying alone and cold I've said my piece, I'll say no more I'll just curl up here and die on the floor. |
2007-08-02 | 2007-08-02 | 26130 | 171 | 2018-02-27 02:25:54 | 2BEEZIE4U | ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-09 | Very great writting... keep it up 50/50 |
172 | 35 | 2018-02-27 02:25:54 | Remain miles apart. | BlueDreams | 2007-08-02 | 5.0 | 32 | Life is getting very bleak I don't think I will find the love I seek The future is seemingly black and I know there is no going back. The chances for success are becoming less and less I have poured out my soul and heart we still remain miles apart. I have exposed the real me for very few to see They will not forget I will probably regret. All I have to offer is me not enough I see My love, heart, help and desire not enough to light anyone's fire Feeling less amused, but totally confused I have lost, so I must let her be there is nothing else to do, I see. But my love for her is so deep it even robs me of sleep I am in so much emotional pain maybe a blade deep into a vein. No, its the way out of the cheat its not me, its not neat To myself I must confess, not leave others to clean up the mess. In the world you can only help a few I only wanted to give her a life that was true There is a lot more to her than meets the eye but she is caged and not allowed to fly. Her potential has no bounds she needs to hear the right sounds Now I see, they are not destined to come from me I've tried my best, can't keep up with the rest. My love she will deny so I may just curl up and die I will push no more, just close the door Hide in obscurity, never again seek purity My last wish from this mess, is that she find love and total success I should have known, as a mere male I was destined to fail. I know that seclusion is a must I must admit it is her I still love and trust Like a sister or best friend, I had hoped it would be until the end Wrong again, I must have been insane Time to let her go, never to let my inner self show Its too much of an emotional drain, impossible pain Never, never, never again. Time to allow myself to grow old forever staying alone and cold I've said my piece, I'll say no more I'll just curl up here and die on the floor. |
2007-08-02 | 2007-08-02 | 26130 | 172 | 2018-02-27 02:25:54 | jose | at 2007-08-09 | Good work i wonder how you did it great creativity keep it up,so touching and it touched me indeed |
173 | 35 | 2018-02-27 02:25:54 | Remain miles apart. | BlueDreams | 2007-08-02 | 5.0 | 32 | Life is getting very bleak I don't think I will find the love I seek The future is seemingly black and I know there is no going back. The chances for success are becoming less and less I have poured out my soul and heart we still remain miles apart. I have exposed the real me for very few to see They will not forget I will probably regret. All I have to offer is me not enough I see My love, heart, help and desire not enough to light anyone's fire Feeling less amused, but totally confused I have lost, so I must let her be there is nothing else to do, I see. But my love for her is so deep it even robs me of sleep I am in so much emotional pain maybe a blade deep into a vein. No, its the way out of the cheat its not me, its not neat To myself I must confess, not leave others to clean up the mess. In the world you can only help a few I only wanted to give her a life that was true There is a lot more to her than meets the eye but she is caged and not allowed to fly. Her potential has no bounds she needs to hear the right sounds Now I see, they are not destined to come from me I've tried my best, can't keep up with the rest. My love she will deny so I may just curl up and die I will push no more, just close the door Hide in obscurity, never again seek purity My last wish from this mess, is that she find love and total success I should have known, as a mere male I was destined to fail. I know that seclusion is a must I must admit it is her I still love and trust Like a sister or best friend, I had hoped it would be until the end Wrong again, I must have been insane Time to let her go, never to let my inner self show Its too much of an emotional drain, impossible pain Never, never, never again. Time to allow myself to grow old forever staying alone and cold I've said my piece, I'll say no more I'll just curl up here and die on the floor. |
2007-08-02 | 2007-08-02 | 26130 | 173 | 2018-02-27 02:25:54 | Ian | ( F C ) at 2010-06-02 | That all was so well written together. |
174 | 35 | 2018-02-27 02:25:54 | Remain miles apart. | BlueDreams | 2007-08-02 | 5.0 | 32 | Life is getting very bleak I don't think I will find the love I seek The future is seemingly black and I know there is no going back. The chances for success are becoming less and less I have poured out my soul and heart we still remain miles apart. I have exposed the real me for very few to see They will not forget I will probably regret. All I have to offer is me not enough I see My love, heart, help and desire not enough to light anyone's fire Feeling less amused, but totally confused I have lost, so I must let her be there is nothing else to do, I see. But my love for her is so deep it even robs me of sleep I am in so much emotional pain maybe a blade deep into a vein. No, its the way out of the cheat its not me, its not neat To myself I must confess, not leave others to clean up the mess. In the world you can only help a few I only wanted to give her a life that was true There is a lot more to her than meets the eye but she is caged and not allowed to fly. Her potential has no bounds she needs to hear the right sounds Now I see, they are not destined to come from me I've tried my best, can't keep up with the rest. My love she will deny so I may just curl up and die I will push no more, just close the door Hide in obscurity, never again seek purity My last wish from this mess, is that she find love and total success I should have known, as a mere male I was destined to fail. I know that seclusion is a must I must admit it is her I still love and trust Like a sister or best friend, I had hoped it would be until the end Wrong again, I must have been insane Time to let her go, never to let my inner self show Its too much of an emotional drain, impossible pain Never, never, never again. Time to allow myself to grow old forever staying alone and cold I've said my piece, I'll say no more I'll just curl up here and die on the floor. |
2007-08-02 | 2007-08-02 | 26130 | 174 | 2018-02-27 02:25:54 | nafeel | at 2011-06-20 | This poem is so deep that it brought back memories for me :D |
175 | 35 | 2018-02-27 02:25:54 | Remain miles apart. | BlueDreams | 2007-08-02 | 5.0 | 32 | Life is getting very bleak I don't think I will find the love I seek The future is seemingly black and I know there is no going back. The chances for success are becoming less and less I have poured out my soul and heart we still remain miles apart. I have exposed the real me for very few to see They will not forget I will probably regret. All I have to offer is me not enough I see My love, heart, help and desire not enough to light anyone's fire Feeling less amused, but totally confused I have lost, so I must let her be there is nothing else to do, I see. But my love for her is so deep it even robs me of sleep I am in so much emotional pain maybe a blade deep into a vein. No, its the way out of the cheat its not me, its not neat To myself I must confess, not leave others to clean up the mess. In the world you can only help a few I only wanted to give her a life that was true There is a lot more to her than meets the eye but she is caged and not allowed to fly. Her potential has no bounds she needs to hear the right sounds Now I see, they are not destined to come from me I've tried my best, can't keep up with the rest. My love she will deny so I may just curl up and die I will push no more, just close the door Hide in obscurity, never again seek purity My last wish from this mess, is that she find love and total success I should have known, as a mere male I was destined to fail. I know that seclusion is a must I must admit it is her I still love and trust Like a sister or best friend, I had hoped it would be until the end Wrong again, I must have been insane Time to let her go, never to let my inner self show Its too much of an emotional drain, impossible pain Never, never, never again. Time to allow myself to grow old forever staying alone and cold I've said my piece, I'll say no more I'll just curl up here and die on the floor. |
2007-08-02 | 2007-08-02 | 26130 | 175 | 2018-02-27 02:25:54 | Max | ( F C D ) at 2012-04-16 | Gr8 piece btw just read the 11th time haha =P 5/5 i already gave that vote |
176 | 36 | 2018-02-27 02:25:59 | One Wish | Jacob M Parnell | 2006-02-03 | 4.9 | 78 | If I had one wish. If one desire could come true. If I had one wish. My wish would be you. If I could choose. I would stay in your arms forever. Our hearts would fuse. And our love would become an endeavor. I would wish for you to stay with me. For you to be my love. You would be my hearts key. Forever my angel, my dove. Forever is a long time. To require in a single command. I will write our love in a rhyme. For it would be my demand. I would ask of this. Only with your permission. Lost in a kiss. Our love is my ambition. So I wished upon the star. The star that reminded me most of you. My actions seemed bizarre. But this wish I had to pursue. If I had one wish. My wish would be you. And since I made that wish. My wish has come true... (c) 2006 Please vote/comment |
2006-02-03 | 2008-11-28 | 333669 | 176 | 2018-02-27 02:25:59 | sade | at 2010-02-09 | This is too cute. I love it |
177 | 36 | 2018-02-27 02:25:59 | One Wish | Jacob M Parnell | 2006-02-03 | 4.9 | 78 | If I had one wish. If one desire could come true. If I had one wish. My wish would be you. If I could choose. I would stay in your arms forever. Our hearts would fuse. And our love would become an endeavor. I would wish for you to stay with me. For you to be my love. You would be my hearts key. Forever my angel, my dove. Forever is a long time. To require in a single command. I will write our love in a rhyme. For it would be my demand. I would ask of this. Only with your permission. Lost in a kiss. Our love is my ambition. So I wished upon the star. The star that reminded me most of you. My actions seemed bizarre. But this wish I had to pursue. If I had one wish. My wish would be you. And since I made that wish. My wish has come true... (c) 2006 Please vote/comment |
2006-02-03 | 2008-11-28 | 333669 | 177 | 2018-02-27 02:25:59 | misa | at 2010-12-14 | Absolutely beautiful =) I smiled with every line and great ending, so blissful. Keep up the amazing work, I admire it. |
179 | 36 | 2018-02-27 02:25:59 | One Wish | Jacob M Parnell | 2006-02-03 | 4.9 | 78 | If I had one wish. If one desire could come true. If I had one wish. My wish would be you. If I could choose. I would stay in your arms forever. Our hearts would fuse. And our love would become an endeavor. I would wish for you to stay with me. For you to be my love. You would be my hearts key. Forever my angel, my dove. Forever is a long time. To require in a single command. I will write our love in a rhyme. For it would be my demand. I would ask of this. Only with your permission. Lost in a kiss. Our love is my ambition. So I wished upon the star. The star that reminded me most of you. My actions seemed bizarre. But this wish I had to pursue. If I had one wish. My wish would be you. And since I made that wish. My wish has come true... (c) 2006 Please vote/comment |
2006-02-03 | 2008-11-28 | 333669 | 179 | 2018-02-27 02:25:59 | michelle | at 2012-08-04 | This poem is so sweet it touches my heart =) Please keep on writing, I would absolutely love to hear more =) |
180 | 36 | 2018-02-27 02:25:59 | One Wish | Jacob M Parnell | 2006-02-03 | 4.9 | 78 | If I had one wish. If one desire could come true. If I had one wish. My wish would be you. If I could choose. I would stay in your arms forever. Our hearts would fuse. And our love would become an endeavor. I would wish for you to stay with me. For you to be my love. You would be my hearts key. Forever my angel, my dove. Forever is a long time. To require in a single command. I will write our love in a rhyme. For it would be my demand. I would ask of this. Only with your permission. Lost in a kiss. Our love is my ambition. So I wished upon the star. The star that reminded me most of you. My actions seemed bizarre. But this wish I had to pursue. If I had one wish. My wish would be you. And since I made that wish. My wish has come true... (c) 2006 Please vote/comment |
2006-02-03 | 2008-11-28 | 333669 | 180 | 2018-02-27 02:25:59 | nanny | at 2015-03-12 | Goood |
181 | 37 | 2018-02-27 02:26:00 | Now That You're Gone | Serena | 2004-02-05 | 4.7 | 64 | Now that you're gone, It's too dark at night. It's constantly cold. And nothing seems right. Now that you're gone It hurts to be alone. I can't stand it here without you Afraid and on my own. Now that you're gone My world means naught, I'm sorry for what I said, And all the times we fought. Now that you're gone, I can't seem to find my smile. I didn't think I'd lose it yet, At least not for a while Now that you're gone, I can't help but yearn For the love that we had And the day that you'll return Now that you're gone And have left me behind I'm loosing my focus And have already lost my mind. Now that you're gone Nothing else will matter Each day I'm without you My heart won't cease to shatter Now that you're gone All it does is rain, The heavens seems to weep, As if they feel my pain. Now that you're gone I just want to cry, Because I curse that night you left, When we had to say good-bye. Now that you're gone I only want one wish, For you to come back And give me just one kiss |
2004-02-05 | 2008-02-05 | 114963 | 36 | 2018-02-27 02:31:24 | Fyri | at 2008-04-08 | WOW!!!!! UMM THAT WAS SO GOOOD. LOVE IT!! |
182 | 37 | 2018-02-27 02:26:00 | Now That You're Gone | Serena | 2004-02-05 | 4.7 | 64 | Now that you're gone, It's too dark at night. It's constantly cold. And nothing seems right. Now that you're gone It hurts to be alone. I can't stand it here without you Afraid and on my own. Now that you're gone My world means naught, I'm sorry for what I said, And all the times we fought. Now that you're gone, I can't seem to find my smile. I didn't think I'd lose it yet, At least not for a while Now that you're gone, I can't help but yearn For the love that we had And the day that you'll return Now that you're gone And have left me behind I'm loosing my focus And have already lost my mind. Now that you're gone Nothing else will matter Each day I'm without you My heart won't cease to shatter Now that you're gone All it does is rain, The heavens seems to weep, As if they feel my pain. Now that you're gone I just want to cry, Because I curse that night you left, When we had to say good-bye. Now that you're gone I only want one wish, For you to come back And give me just one kiss |
2004-02-05 | 2008-02-05 | 114963 | 182 | 2018-02-27 02:26:00 | Patricia | at 2008-09-10 | Wow this reminded me of when my used to be boyfriend had to leave to mexico to be wit his family..we had been togeher for three years and i told him i would wait not knowing that it would be very hard. Today we are no longer together, it just couldnt work out like that. WHOO! do i miss him like crazy, and i how i wish hed come back.. |
183 | 38 | 2018-02-27 02:26:01 | What I've Kept Inside | TinyDancer46 | 2006-02-27 | 4.6 | 506 | Sorry if this sucks, just had to get everything out.. I don't know why its hard for me I'm not sure why I cry I have no clue why it still hurts To know we said goodbye I wish I could explain it But you'd never understand The tears that burn in my eyes When I see you hold her hand... But you'll never really know The pain that I go through For I just fake a smile and say That I'm so glad for you... Yet I'll spend another day With pain that never ends Wishing we could go back... To before I said "just friends" |
2006-02-27 | 2007-06-17 | 26408 | 183 | 2018-02-27 02:40:44 | FinalXBreathX | ( F P C ) at 2008-03-27 | This is So Beautifuly Akward. I love it. And the maening is just Wow....so deep and I understand it completly. :-) |
184 | 38 | 2018-02-27 02:26:01 | What I've Kept Inside | TinyDancer46 | 2006-02-27 | 4.6 | 506 | Sorry if this sucks, just had to get everything out.. I don't know why its hard for me I'm not sure why I cry I have no clue why it still hurts To know we said goodbye I wish I could explain it But you'd never understand The tears that burn in my eyes When I see you hold her hand... But you'll never really know The pain that I go through For I just fake a smile and say That I'm so glad for you... Yet I'll spend another day With pain that never ends Wishing we could go back... To before I said "just friends" |
2006-02-27 | 2007-06-17 | 26408 | 184 | 2018-02-27 02:26:01 | l0VEiSPAiN | at 2009-02-19 | I feel the pain i experienced it..uqqh but i had to move on like he did..i found my love 5/5..excellent job! |
185 | 38 | 2018-02-27 02:26:01 | What I've Kept Inside | TinyDancer46 | 2006-02-27 | 4.6 | 506 | Sorry if this sucks, just had to get everything out.. I don't know why its hard for me I'm not sure why I cry I have no clue why it still hurts To know we said goodbye I wish I could explain it But you'd never understand The tears that burn in my eyes When I see you hold her hand... But you'll never really know The pain that I go through For I just fake a smile and say That I'm so glad for you... Yet I'll spend another day With pain that never ends Wishing we could go back... To before I said "just friends" |
2006-02-27 | 2007-06-17 | 26408 | 185 | 2018-02-27 02:29:13 | Mariiia | ( F D ) at 2011-01-15 | Awwww ii love it. this is what i am going thru lossing someone i love with all my heart & i wish i can get him back but now he is with someone else. really great job. |
186 | 38 | 2018-02-27 02:26:01 | What I've Kept Inside | TinyDancer46 | 2006-02-27 | 4.6 | 506 | Sorry if this sucks, just had to get everything out.. I don't know why its hard for me I'm not sure why I cry I have no clue why it still hurts To know we said goodbye I wish I could explain it But you'd never understand The tears that burn in my eyes When I see you hold her hand... But you'll never really know The pain that I go through For I just fake a smile and say That I'm so glad for you... Yet I'll spend another day With pain that never ends Wishing we could go back... To before I said "just friends" |
2006-02-27 | 2007-06-17 | 26408 | 186 | 2018-02-27 02:26:01 | Amore E Dolore | ( C ) at 2012-01-27 | Goodbyes always hurt when your heart is not ready to let go |
187 | 38 | 2018-02-27 02:26:01 | What I've Kept Inside | TinyDancer46 | 2006-02-27 | 4.6 | 506 | Sorry if this sucks, just had to get everything out.. I don't know why its hard for me I'm not sure why I cry I have no clue why it still hurts To know we said goodbye I wish I could explain it But you'd never understand The tears that burn in my eyes When I see you hold her hand... But you'll never really know The pain that I go through For I just fake a smile and say That I'm so glad for you... Yet I'll spend another day With pain that never ends Wishing we could go back... To before I said "just friends" |
2006-02-27 | 2007-06-17 | 26408 | 187 | 2018-02-27 02:31:45 | TONIANNA | at 2012-10-19 | I can related to this completely.... Because I am scared to LOVE again.... |
191 | 39 | 2018-02-27 02:26:02 | Dear Diary | TinyDancer46 | 2005-12-13 | 4.7 | 252 | *This poem is about the views of two different people, in two different diaries* Dear Diary, It's Megan once again And I'm just writing to say That David just walked by again He didn't glance my way It's just like he's forgotten Just what we used to be He doesn't even care at all But he means so much to me Dear Diary, It's David once again And I'm just writing to say That Megan walked on by again Without glancing my way I miss her so much that it hurts But of course she doesn't see That she'll always mean the world And she's everything to me Dear Diary, Today David was with her And I tried hard not to cry But I couldn't help the tears As they were falling from my eye I turned and walked away So my feelings wouldn't show But the truth is, I still love him More than he will ever know Dear Diary, I saw Megan again today When I was walking with a friend I faked a smile when she walked by But it's so hard to pretend I wonder if she'll ever know She's always on my mind I wonder if she still loves me Or if she's just left me behind Dear Diary, I think that I will tell him That I want him to be mine That I'll be with him forever And I'll love him for all time Dear Diary, I think that I will tell her That she's everything to me And that I want to go back To the way we used to be ************************ Dear Diary, I'm sorry that it took so long But I'm writing just to say That Dave and I got married We've got a daughter on the way |
2005-12-13 | 2007-06-24 | 19621 | 30 | 2018-02-27 02:34:57 | allex0r | at 2014-10-31 | Em why is this so on point :( |
188 | 39 | 2018-02-27 02:26:02 | Dear Diary | TinyDancer46 | 2005-12-13 | 4.7 | 252 | *This poem is about the views of two different people, in two different diaries* Dear Diary, It's Megan once again And I'm just writing to say That David just walked by again He didn't glance my way It's just like he's forgotten Just what we used to be He doesn't even care at all But he means so much to me Dear Diary, It's David once again And I'm just writing to say That Megan walked on by again Without glancing my way I miss her so much that it hurts But of course she doesn't see That she'll always mean the world And she's everything to me Dear Diary, Today David was with her And I tried hard not to cry But I couldn't help the tears As they were falling from my eye I turned and walked away So my feelings wouldn't show But the truth is, I still love him More than he will ever know Dear Diary, I saw Megan again today When I was walking with a friend I faked a smile when she walked by But it's so hard to pretend I wonder if she'll ever know She's always on my mind I wonder if she still loves me Or if she's just left me behind Dear Diary, I think that I will tell him That I want him to be mine That I'll be with him forever And I'll love him for all time Dear Diary, I think that I will tell her That she's everything to me And that I want to go back To the way we used to be ************************ Dear Diary, I'm sorry that it took so long But I'm writing just to say That Dave and I got married We've got a daughter on the way |
2005-12-13 | 2007-06-24 | 19621 | 188 | 2018-02-27 03:03:01 | cZaRiNa | ( F P C ) at 2008-10-03 | Nice vocabulary....!! keep it up.. I really love it,..5/5 ^_^ |
189 | 39 | 2018-02-27 02:26:02 | Dear Diary | TinyDancer46 | 2005-12-13 | 4.7 | 252 | *This poem is about the views of two different people, in two different diaries* Dear Diary, It's Megan once again And I'm just writing to say That David just walked by again He didn't glance my way It's just like he's forgotten Just what we used to be He doesn't even care at all But he means so much to me Dear Diary, It's David once again And I'm just writing to say That Megan walked on by again Without glancing my way I miss her so much that it hurts But of course she doesn't see That she'll always mean the world And she's everything to me Dear Diary, Today David was with her And I tried hard not to cry But I couldn't help the tears As they were falling from my eye I turned and walked away So my feelings wouldn't show But the truth is, I still love him More than he will ever know Dear Diary, I saw Megan again today When I was walking with a friend I faked a smile when she walked by But it's so hard to pretend I wonder if she'll ever know She's always on my mind I wonder if she still loves me Or if she's just left me behind Dear Diary, I think that I will tell him That I want him to be mine That I'll be with him forever And I'll love him for all time Dear Diary, I think that I will tell her That she's everything to me And that I want to go back To the way we used to be ************************ Dear Diary, I'm sorry that it took so long But I'm writing just to say That Dave and I got married We've got a daughter on the way |
2005-12-13 | 2007-06-24 | 19621 | 189 | 2018-02-27 05:10:59 | Strawberry Lemon | ( F P C ) at 2009-01-03 | Awww this is a very sweet, yet sad but touching poem. Great work luv 5/5 |
190 | 39 | 2018-02-27 02:26:02 | Dear Diary | TinyDancer46 | 2005-12-13 | 4.7 | 252 | *This poem is about the views of two different people, in two different diaries* Dear Diary, It's Megan once again And I'm just writing to say That David just walked by again He didn't glance my way It's just like he's forgotten Just what we used to be He doesn't even care at all But he means so much to me Dear Diary, It's David once again And I'm just writing to say That Megan walked on by again Without glancing my way I miss her so much that it hurts But of course she doesn't see That she'll always mean the world And she's everything to me Dear Diary, Today David was with her And I tried hard not to cry But I couldn't help the tears As they were falling from my eye I turned and walked away So my feelings wouldn't show But the truth is, I still love him More than he will ever know Dear Diary, I saw Megan again today When I was walking with a friend I faked a smile when she walked by But it's so hard to pretend I wonder if she'll ever know She's always on my mind I wonder if she still loves me Or if she's just left me behind Dear Diary, I think that I will tell him That I want him to be mine That I'll be with him forever And I'll love him for all time Dear Diary, I think that I will tell her That she's everything to me And that I want to go back To the way we used to be ************************ Dear Diary, I'm sorry that it took so long But I'm writing just to say That Dave and I got married We've got a daughter on the way |
2005-12-13 | 2007-06-24 | 19621 | 190 | 2018-02-27 02:26:02 | bob | at 2009-11-24 | Whoa... this one is just fantastic... beautifully written... no sarcastically profound words... just good... |
192 | 39 | 2018-02-27 02:26:02 | Dear Diary | TinyDancer46 | 2005-12-13 | 4.7 | 252 | *This poem is about the views of two different people, in two different diaries* Dear Diary, It's Megan once again And I'm just writing to say That David just walked by again He didn't glance my way It's just like he's forgotten Just what we used to be He doesn't even care at all But he means so much to me Dear Diary, It's David once again And I'm just writing to say That Megan walked on by again Without glancing my way I miss her so much that it hurts But of course she doesn't see That she'll always mean the world And she's everything to me Dear Diary, Today David was with her And I tried hard not to cry But I couldn't help the tears As they were falling from my eye I turned and walked away So my feelings wouldn't show But the truth is, I still love him More than he will ever know Dear Diary, I saw Megan again today When I was walking with a friend I faked a smile when she walked by But it's so hard to pretend I wonder if she'll ever know She's always on my mind I wonder if she still loves me Or if she's just left me behind Dear Diary, I think that I will tell him That I want him to be mine That I'll be with him forever And I'll love him for all time Dear Diary, I think that I will tell her That she's everything to me And that I want to go back To the way we used to be ************************ Dear Diary, I'm sorry that it took so long But I'm writing just to say That Dave and I got married We've got a daughter on the way |
2005-12-13 | 2007-06-24 | 19621 | 192 | 2018-02-27 02:26:19 | ketaki | at 2016-07-21 | Nice and commit ed love i loved the piece of work. |
197 | 40 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | This cyber love | Eraklis | 2004-10-09 | 4.8 | 133 | Is this real or in my dreams My worlds unraveling at the seams You have my heart now take my soul This cyber love is what makes me whole I can't believe what's happening to me Your face so perfect that I've never seen Your lips so soft I may never touch I only feel the keyboard I clutch I need you now I need you forever In an electric world to be together A surreal place that plays with the mind In a cloned world of two of a kind I consume your words they filter inside No matter what I do I can't seem to hide My trembling hands awaiting the rush When I feel you near to resume this crush Your my everything my unyielding desire the spark to the match before it lights fire The angel within that whispers my name Controlling the moves in this wicked game This cyber love Is why I awake This cyber love is my only escape The time has come I feel it in my spine When I look toward the melancholy light and see your on-line. |
2004-10-09 | 2007-06-10 | 49616 | 187 | 2018-02-27 02:31:45 | TONIANNA | at 2012-10-19 | I can related to this completely.... Because I am scared to LOVE again.... |
193 | 40 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | This cyber love | Eraklis | 2004-10-09 | 4.8 | 133 | Is this real or in my dreams My worlds unraveling at the seams You have my heart now take my soul This cyber love is what makes me whole I can't believe what's happening to me Your face so perfect that I've never seen Your lips so soft I may never touch I only feel the keyboard I clutch I need you now I need you forever In an electric world to be together A surreal place that plays with the mind In a cloned world of two of a kind I consume your words they filter inside No matter what I do I can't seem to hide My trembling hands awaiting the rush When I feel you near to resume this crush Your my everything my unyielding desire the spark to the match before it lights fire The angel within that whispers my name Controlling the moves in this wicked game This cyber love Is why I awake This cyber love is my only escape The time has come I feel it in my spine When I look toward the melancholy light and see your on-line. |
2004-10-09 | 2007-06-10 | 49616 | 193 | 2018-02-27 02:26:21 | Jodie Phillips | ( F P C ) at 2008-02-12 | Wow that is so so sweet. If my boys grow up to write something like that for me i would be the happiest mum alive...Thats what mums are for though, they should be there no matter what i know i am gonna be |
194 | 40 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | This cyber love | Eraklis | 2004-10-09 | 4.8 | 133 | Is this real or in my dreams My worlds unraveling at the seams You have my heart now take my soul This cyber love is what makes me whole I can't believe what's happening to me Your face so perfect that I've never seen Your lips so soft I may never touch I only feel the keyboard I clutch I need you now I need you forever In an electric world to be together A surreal place that plays with the mind In a cloned world of two of a kind I consume your words they filter inside No matter what I do I can't seem to hide My trembling hands awaiting the rush When I feel you near to resume this crush Your my everything my unyielding desire the spark to the match before it lights fire The angel within that whispers my name Controlling the moves in this wicked game This cyber love Is why I awake This cyber love is my only escape The time has come I feel it in my spine When I look toward the melancholy light and see your on-line. |
2004-10-09 | 2007-06-10 | 49616 | 194 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | anonymous lover | ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-24 | This is great.....and how i feel. wow. |
195 | 40 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | This cyber love | Eraklis | 2004-10-09 | 4.8 | 133 | Is this real or in my dreams My worlds unraveling at the seams You have my heart now take my soul This cyber love is what makes me whole I can't believe what's happening to me Your face so perfect that I've never seen Your lips so soft I may never touch I only feel the keyboard I clutch I need you now I need you forever In an electric world to be together A surreal place that plays with the mind In a cloned world of two of a kind I consume your words they filter inside No matter what I do I can't seem to hide My trembling hands awaiting the rush When I feel you near to resume this crush Your my everything my unyielding desire the spark to the match before it lights fire The angel within that whispers my name Controlling the moves in this wicked game This cyber love Is why I awake This cyber love is my only escape The time has come I feel it in my spine When I look toward the melancholy light and see your on-line. |
2004-10-09 | 2007-06-10 | 49616 | 195 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | MrPurple | at 2008-04-20 | This is one of the poems I actually enjoyed, good job, keep up the good work |
196 | 40 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | This cyber love | Eraklis | 2004-10-09 | 4.8 | 133 | Is this real or in my dreams My worlds unraveling at the seams You have my heart now take my soul This cyber love is what makes me whole I can't believe what's happening to me Your face so perfect that I've never seen Your lips so soft I may never touch I only feel the keyboard I clutch I need you now I need you forever In an electric world to be together A surreal place that plays with the mind In a cloned world of two of a kind I consume your words they filter inside No matter what I do I can't seem to hide My trembling hands awaiting the rush When I feel you near to resume this crush Your my everything my unyielding desire the spark to the match before it lights fire The angel within that whispers my name Controlling the moves in this wicked game This cyber love Is why I awake This cyber love is my only escape The time has come I feel it in my spine When I look toward the melancholy light and see your on-line. |
2004-10-09 | 2007-06-10 | 49616 | 196 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | patrick | at 2009-11-06 | Nice one liked it ^_^ |
198 | 41 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | Bed Of Blood | Kayla | 2005-02-11 | 4.6 | 1858 | He needed her kiss She longed for his touch He wanted to hold her Thats not asking for much So distant they were But so close were their hearts The feelings they felt made up For their time spent apart They spoke every day But the lonely nights got longer All the wrong words said Only made the love grow stronger People told her it was not real They told her it wouldnt last But she knew he truly loved her She could not put him in the past She called him late one night But he never answered the phone He was always there for her before Why had he left her alone? She tried to call him back As thoughts ran through her mind She was afraid he was with someone else She did not want him to leave her behind The next day he did not call Knowing he had treated her wrong Thinking of what he did the night before Left him depressed all day long She sat there crying in the dark As he did the same so many miles away He picked up the phone and dialed four numbers Before he realized he had nothing to say Three long days passed They still had not spoken She was more scared than she had ever been And her fragile heart was broken He knew what he must do He had to tell her the mistake he made Despite the fear of what he could lose He dialed the number and the phone rang It shocked her when she heard the ring She hesitated before she answered And when he told her he slept with another girl The tears fell faster She wanted to hang up right then But she listened to him apologize She tried to make out his words Through the sobs and sad cries She couldnt forgive him at the moment She simply said "alright" and left him there He stayed on the line long after she left Then he grabbed his car keys and ran down the stairs She lay in her bed Clinging tight to the sheets She did not even move She just wanted to weep He drove farther and farther Miles from his hometown He just wanted to take her in his arms He had to get to her somehow He drove as fast as he could Did not care about the traffic Then out of nowhere Thats where the crash happened She did not sleep at all that night She couldnt stand the pain Before she began to take a shower The phone started to ring She did not know who it was But she ran to the receiver She thought at first it was him Instead it was her mother She could tell her mom had been crying When she told her to turn to channel two The phone fell down hard on the floor When she saw what was on the news The funeral was tragic She had not seen him in two years Seeing him lying in the casket Is what brought all the tears Old memories started to flood back to her Most were good but some were bad Thats when she realized He was all she ever had "He was only eighteen," she heard them say "He had so much to give." She wished so hard that it could have been her She wished he would have lived The thing that hurt her the most Is that he was almost at her home She kept thinking he might have survived If only she had known After the funeral the police came to her house And handed her a letter It was an apology from him to her Saying that he would make this all better It was the sweetest thing she ever read And it brought more tears than ever She read it over and over again A tear falling with every single letter It said how they would spend their life together Get married and have a family It said how much he loved her And how he promised to make her happy She went home that day And just sat alone on her bed Reading his words again and again Repeating them in her head She took out her scrapbook And looked at their old pictures Her heart filled with pain Knowing that he was not with her She grabbed a pen and a notebook And began writing a letter When she finished she folded it up And bowed her head with a prayer She went into the kitchen And found the sharpest knife She had made her decision She gave up her life It was not because she wanted to die She just wanted to see him again And as she took her last lonely breath She was thinking of him They found her on the bed of blood With his letter in one hand and hers in the other They saw his picture lying on her heart And knew they were finally together i love you, jody!!! |
2005-02-11 | 2006-06-07 | 45415 | 198 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | Kenny | ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-01 | Nice poem! Love It!! |
199 | 41 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | Bed Of Blood | Kayla | 2005-02-11 | 4.6 | 1858 | He needed her kiss She longed for his touch He wanted to hold her Thats not asking for much So distant they were But so close were their hearts The feelings they felt made up For their time spent apart They spoke every day But the lonely nights got longer All the wrong words said Only made the love grow stronger People told her it was not real They told her it wouldnt last But she knew he truly loved her She could not put him in the past She called him late one night But he never answered the phone He was always there for her before Why had he left her alone? She tried to call him back As thoughts ran through her mind She was afraid he was with someone else She did not want him to leave her behind The next day he did not call Knowing he had treated her wrong Thinking of what he did the night before Left him depressed all day long She sat there crying in the dark As he did the same so many miles away He picked up the phone and dialed four numbers Before he realized he had nothing to say Three long days passed They still had not spoken She was more scared than she had ever been And her fragile heart was broken He knew what he must do He had to tell her the mistake he made Despite the fear of what he could lose He dialed the number and the phone rang It shocked her when she heard the ring She hesitated before she answered And when he told her he slept with another girl The tears fell faster She wanted to hang up right then But she listened to him apologize She tried to make out his words Through the sobs and sad cries She couldnt forgive him at the moment She simply said "alright" and left him there He stayed on the line long after she left Then he grabbed his car keys and ran down the stairs She lay in her bed Clinging tight to the sheets She did not even move She just wanted to weep He drove farther and farther Miles from his hometown He just wanted to take her in his arms He had to get to her somehow He drove as fast as he could Did not care about the traffic Then out of nowhere Thats where the crash happened She did not sleep at all that night She couldnt stand the pain Before she began to take a shower The phone started to ring She did not know who it was But she ran to the receiver She thought at first it was him Instead it was her mother She could tell her mom had been crying When she told her to turn to channel two The phone fell down hard on the floor When she saw what was on the news The funeral was tragic She had not seen him in two years Seeing him lying in the casket Is what brought all the tears Old memories started to flood back to her Most were good but some were bad Thats when she realized He was all she ever had "He was only eighteen," she heard them say "He had so much to give." She wished so hard that it could have been her She wished he would have lived The thing that hurt her the most Is that he was almost at her home She kept thinking he might have survived If only she had known After the funeral the police came to her house And handed her a letter It was an apology from him to her Saying that he would make this all better It was the sweetest thing she ever read And it brought more tears than ever She read it over and over again A tear falling with every single letter It said how they would spend their life together Get married and have a family It said how much he loved her And how he promised to make her happy She went home that day And just sat alone on her bed Reading his words again and again Repeating them in her head She took out her scrapbook And looked at their old pictures Her heart filled with pain Knowing that he was not with her She grabbed a pen and a notebook And began writing a letter When she finished she folded it up And bowed her head with a prayer She went into the kitchen And found the sharpest knife She had made her decision She gave up her life It was not because she wanted to die She just wanted to see him again And as she took her last lonely breath She was thinking of him They found her on the bed of blood With his letter in one hand and hers in the other They saw his picture lying on her heart And knew they were finally together i love you, jody!!! |
2005-02-11 | 2006-06-07 | 45415 | 199 | 2018-02-27 02:26:19 | Khanyisile Cele | at 2007-10-17 | That was sweet and nice love your poems |
200 | 41 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | Bed Of Blood | Kayla | 2005-02-11 | 4.6 | 1858 | He needed her kiss She longed for his touch He wanted to hold her Thats not asking for much So distant they were But so close were their hearts The feelings they felt made up For their time spent apart They spoke every day But the lonely nights got longer All the wrong words said Only made the love grow stronger People told her it was not real They told her it wouldnt last But she knew he truly loved her She could not put him in the past She called him late one night But he never answered the phone He was always there for her before Why had he left her alone? She tried to call him back As thoughts ran through her mind She was afraid he was with someone else She did not want him to leave her behind The next day he did not call Knowing he had treated her wrong Thinking of what he did the night before Left him depressed all day long She sat there crying in the dark As he did the same so many miles away He picked up the phone and dialed four numbers Before he realized he had nothing to say Three long days passed They still had not spoken She was more scared than she had ever been And her fragile heart was broken He knew what he must do He had to tell her the mistake he made Despite the fear of what he could lose He dialed the number and the phone rang It shocked her when she heard the ring She hesitated before she answered And when he told her he slept with another girl The tears fell faster She wanted to hang up right then But she listened to him apologize She tried to make out his words Through the sobs and sad cries She couldnt forgive him at the moment She simply said "alright" and left him there He stayed on the line long after she left Then he grabbed his car keys and ran down the stairs She lay in her bed Clinging tight to the sheets She did not even move She just wanted to weep He drove farther and farther Miles from his hometown He just wanted to take her in his arms He had to get to her somehow He drove as fast as he could Did not care about the traffic Then out of nowhere Thats where the crash happened She did not sleep at all that night She couldnt stand the pain Before she began to take a shower The phone started to ring She did not know who it was But she ran to the receiver She thought at first it was him Instead it was her mother She could tell her mom had been crying When she told her to turn to channel two The phone fell down hard on the floor When she saw what was on the news The funeral was tragic She had not seen him in two years Seeing him lying in the casket Is what brought all the tears Old memories started to flood back to her Most were good but some were bad Thats when she realized He was all she ever had "He was only eighteen," she heard them say "He had so much to give." She wished so hard that it could have been her She wished he would have lived The thing that hurt her the most Is that he was almost at her home She kept thinking he might have survived If only she had known After the funeral the police came to her house And handed her a letter It was an apology from him to her Saying that he would make this all better It was the sweetest thing she ever read And it brought more tears than ever She read it over and over again A tear falling with every single letter It said how they would spend their life together Get married and have a family It said how much he loved her And how he promised to make her happy She went home that day And just sat alone on her bed Reading his words again and again Repeating them in her head She took out her scrapbook And looked at their old pictures Her heart filled with pain Knowing that he was not with her She grabbed a pen and a notebook And began writing a letter When she finished she folded it up And bowed her head with a prayer She went into the kitchen And found the sharpest knife She had made her decision She gave up her life It was not because she wanted to die She just wanted to see him again And as she took her last lonely breath She was thinking of him They found her on the bed of blood With his letter in one hand and hers in the other They saw his picture lying on her heart And knew they were finally together i love you, jody!!! |
2005-02-11 | 2006-06-07 | 45415 | 200 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | Tati | at 2007-11-23 | WOW.... THAT WAS INTENSE U DID A REALLY GOOD JOB I ALMOST CRYED READING IT U HAVE A GIFT |
201 | 41 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | Bed Of Blood | Kayla | 2005-02-11 | 4.6 | 1858 | He needed her kiss She longed for his touch He wanted to hold her Thats not asking for much So distant they were But so close were their hearts The feelings they felt made up For their time spent apart They spoke every day But the lonely nights got longer All the wrong words said Only made the love grow stronger People told her it was not real They told her it wouldnt last But she knew he truly loved her She could not put him in the past She called him late one night But he never answered the phone He was always there for her before Why had he left her alone? She tried to call him back As thoughts ran through her mind She was afraid he was with someone else She did not want him to leave her behind The next day he did not call Knowing he had treated her wrong Thinking of what he did the night before Left him depressed all day long She sat there crying in the dark As he did the same so many miles away He picked up the phone and dialed four numbers Before he realized he had nothing to say Three long days passed They still had not spoken She was more scared than she had ever been And her fragile heart was broken He knew what he must do He had to tell her the mistake he made Despite the fear of what he could lose He dialed the number and the phone rang It shocked her when she heard the ring She hesitated before she answered And when he told her he slept with another girl The tears fell faster She wanted to hang up right then But she listened to him apologize She tried to make out his words Through the sobs and sad cries She couldnt forgive him at the moment She simply said "alright" and left him there He stayed on the line long after she left Then he grabbed his car keys and ran down the stairs She lay in her bed Clinging tight to the sheets She did not even move She just wanted to weep He drove farther and farther Miles from his hometown He just wanted to take her in his arms He had to get to her somehow He drove as fast as he could Did not care about the traffic Then out of nowhere Thats where the crash happened She did not sleep at all that night She couldnt stand the pain Before she began to take a shower The phone started to ring She did not know who it was But she ran to the receiver She thought at first it was him Instead it was her mother She could tell her mom had been crying When she told her to turn to channel two The phone fell down hard on the floor When she saw what was on the news The funeral was tragic She had not seen him in two years Seeing him lying in the casket Is what brought all the tears Old memories started to flood back to her Most were good but some were bad Thats when she realized He was all she ever had "He was only eighteen," she heard them say "He had so much to give." She wished so hard that it could have been her She wished he would have lived The thing that hurt her the most Is that he was almost at her home She kept thinking he might have survived If only she had known After the funeral the police came to her house And handed her a letter It was an apology from him to her Saying that he would make this all better It was the sweetest thing she ever read And it brought more tears than ever She read it over and over again A tear falling with every single letter It said how they would spend their life together Get married and have a family It said how much he loved her And how he promised to make her happy She went home that day And just sat alone on her bed Reading his words again and again Repeating them in her head She took out her scrapbook And looked at their old pictures Her heart filled with pain Knowing that he was not with her She grabbed a pen and a notebook And began writing a letter When she finished she folded it up And bowed her head with a prayer She went into the kitchen And found the sharpest knife She had made her decision She gave up her life It was not because she wanted to die She just wanted to see him again And as she took her last lonely breath She was thinking of him They found her on the bed of blood With his letter in one hand and hers in the other They saw his picture lying on her heart And knew they were finally together i love you, jody!!! |
2005-02-11 | 2006-06-07 | 45415 | 201 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | Mia | at 2008-01-09 | Wow... is that enough to express my thoughts and feelings? i guess not, but I'm speechless |
202 | 41 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | Bed Of Blood | Kayla | 2005-02-11 | 4.6 | 1858 | He needed her kiss She longed for his touch He wanted to hold her Thats not asking for much So distant they were But so close were their hearts The feelings they felt made up For their time spent apart They spoke every day But the lonely nights got longer All the wrong words said Only made the love grow stronger People told her it was not real They told her it wouldnt last But she knew he truly loved her She could not put him in the past She called him late one night But he never answered the phone He was always there for her before Why had he left her alone? She tried to call him back As thoughts ran through her mind She was afraid he was with someone else She did not want him to leave her behind The next day he did not call Knowing he had treated her wrong Thinking of what he did the night before Left him depressed all day long She sat there crying in the dark As he did the same so many miles away He picked up the phone and dialed four numbers Before he realized he had nothing to say Three long days passed They still had not spoken She was more scared than she had ever been And her fragile heart was broken He knew what he must do He had to tell her the mistake he made Despite the fear of what he could lose He dialed the number and the phone rang It shocked her when she heard the ring She hesitated before she answered And when he told her he slept with another girl The tears fell faster She wanted to hang up right then But she listened to him apologize She tried to make out his words Through the sobs and sad cries She couldnt forgive him at the moment She simply said "alright" and left him there He stayed on the line long after she left Then he grabbed his car keys and ran down the stairs She lay in her bed Clinging tight to the sheets She did not even move She just wanted to weep He drove farther and farther Miles from his hometown He just wanted to take her in his arms He had to get to her somehow He drove as fast as he could Did not care about the traffic Then out of nowhere Thats where the crash happened She did not sleep at all that night She couldnt stand the pain Before she began to take a shower The phone started to ring She did not know who it was But she ran to the receiver She thought at first it was him Instead it was her mother She could tell her mom had been crying When she told her to turn to channel two The phone fell down hard on the floor When she saw what was on the news The funeral was tragic She had not seen him in two years Seeing him lying in the casket Is what brought all the tears Old memories started to flood back to her Most were good but some were bad Thats when she realized He was all she ever had "He was only eighteen," she heard them say "He had so much to give." She wished so hard that it could have been her She wished he would have lived The thing that hurt her the most Is that he was almost at her home She kept thinking he might have survived If only she had known After the funeral the police came to her house And handed her a letter It was an apology from him to her Saying that he would make this all better It was the sweetest thing she ever read And it brought more tears than ever She read it over and over again A tear falling with every single letter It said how they would spend their life together Get married and have a family It said how much he loved her And how he promised to make her happy She went home that day And just sat alone on her bed Reading his words again and again Repeating them in her head She took out her scrapbook And looked at their old pictures Her heart filled with pain Knowing that he was not with her She grabbed a pen and a notebook And began writing a letter When she finished she folded it up And bowed her head with a prayer She went into the kitchen And found the sharpest knife She had made her decision She gave up her life It was not because she wanted to die She just wanted to see him again And as she took her last lonely breath She was thinking of him They found her on the bed of blood With his letter in one hand and hers in the other They saw his picture lying on her heart And knew they were finally together i love you, jody!!! |
2005-02-11 | 2006-06-07 | 45415 | 202 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | Composed Catastrophe | ( F P C D ) at 2008-11-24 | The last stanza is a sadistic twist! she died but its ok kind of thing idk i love how you did that though : ) great job long poem but i didn't even notice till i had to scroll back up to the top ! you made it flow nicely i hope it isn't true thought : / that would be sad 5/5 of course! |
203 | 42 | 2018-02-27 02:26:08 | I WISH* | cassanova | 2007-08-19 | 4.8 | 69 | I wish... i wish i was you lip gloss, every day your lips i touch, always with you in your purse, id see your face so much, i wish i was your eye liner, in your eyes id be, finally theres a moment, where all you see is me, i wish i was your pants, actually your belt on your waist, wrapped tightly around you, as we went place to place, i wish i was your sweater, a turtle neck preferably, i could smell your scent, and kiss your neck indefinitely, i wish i was your mirror, id be the first to see your face, every morning you woke up, only us in a confined space, i wish i was yours, i wish with all my might, just for one more time, which we could spend a night.. |
2007-08-19 | 2007-08-30 | 69468 | 77 | 2018-02-27 02:26:47 | grace | ( F C ) at 2008-09-10 | Ahhhhh sweet poem!! 5/5! =) |
205 | 42 | 2018-02-27 02:26:08 | I WISH* | cassanova | 2007-08-19 | 4.8 | 69 | I wish... i wish i was you lip gloss, every day your lips i touch, always with you in your purse, id see your face so much, i wish i was your eye liner, in your eyes id be, finally theres a moment, where all you see is me, i wish i was your pants, actually your belt on your waist, wrapped tightly around you, as we went place to place, i wish i was your sweater, a turtle neck preferably, i could smell your scent, and kiss your neck indefinitely, i wish i was your mirror, id be the first to see your face, every morning you woke up, only us in a confined space, i wish i was yours, i wish with all my might, just for one more time, which we could spend a night.. |
2007-08-19 | 2007-08-30 | 69468 | 98 | 2018-02-27 02:26:08 | Arun Khan | ( F P C ) at 2008-09-19 | This was really well written, loved the theme.. must say, a piece of art... 5/5 Regards Arun. |
204 | 42 | 2018-02-27 02:26:08 | I WISH* | cassanova | 2007-08-19 | 4.8 | 69 | I wish... i wish i was you lip gloss, every day your lips i touch, always with you in your purse, id see your face so much, i wish i was your eye liner, in your eyes id be, finally theres a moment, where all you see is me, i wish i was your pants, actually your belt on your waist, wrapped tightly around you, as we went place to place, i wish i was your sweater, a turtle neck preferably, i could smell your scent, and kiss your neck indefinitely, i wish i was your mirror, id be the first to see your face, every morning you woke up, only us in a confined space, i wish i was yours, i wish with all my might, just for one more time, which we could spend a night.. |
2007-08-19 | 2007-08-30 | 69468 | 204 | 2018-02-27 03:28:54 | Paige | ( F C ) at 2008-09-15 | I love your writing style :) great poem :) |
206 | 42 | 2018-02-27 02:26:08 | I WISH* | cassanova | 2007-08-19 | 4.8 | 69 | I wish... i wish i was you lip gloss, every day your lips i touch, always with you in your purse, id see your face so much, i wish i was your eye liner, in your eyes id be, finally theres a moment, where all you see is me, i wish i was your pants, actually your belt on your waist, wrapped tightly around you, as we went place to place, i wish i was your sweater, a turtle neck preferably, i could smell your scent, and kiss your neck indefinitely, i wish i was your mirror, id be the first to see your face, every morning you woke up, only us in a confined space, i wish i was yours, i wish with all my might, just for one more time, which we could spend a night.. |
2007-08-19 | 2007-08-30 | 69468 | 206 | 2018-02-27 02:26:08 | SashaMirage | ( F P C ) at 2008-12-13 | Wow, you really expressed how much you desire to be with this girl very well. I really enjoyed reading it. 5/5 |
207 | 42 | 2018-02-27 02:26:08 | I WISH* | cassanova | 2007-08-19 | 4.8 | 69 | I wish... i wish i was you lip gloss, every day your lips i touch, always with you in your purse, id see your face so much, i wish i was your eye liner, in your eyes id be, finally theres a moment, where all you see is me, i wish i was your pants, actually your belt on your waist, wrapped tightly around you, as we went place to place, i wish i was your sweater, a turtle neck preferably, i could smell your scent, and kiss your neck indefinitely, i wish i was your mirror, id be the first to see your face, every morning you woke up, only us in a confined space, i wish i was yours, i wish with all my might, just for one more time, which we could spend a night.. |
2007-08-19 | 2007-08-30 | 69468 | 207 | 2018-02-27 02:26:08 | clare demecillo | at 2012-11-07 | VERY NICE |
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