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poem.id | poem.ts | poem.title | poem.author | poem.date | poem.rating | poem.vote | poem.content | poem.submission_date | poem.last_edit | poem.visits | poem.poem_x_comment_id |
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41 | 2018-02-27 02:26:04 | Bed Of Blood | Kayla | 2005-02-11 | 4.6 | 1858 | He needed her kiss She longed for his touch He wanted to hold her Thats not asking for much So distant they were But so close were their hearts The feelings they felt made up For their time spent apart They spoke every day But the lonely nights got longer All the wrong words said Only made the love grow stronger People told her it was not real They told her it wouldnt last But she knew he truly loved her She could not put him in the past She called him late one night But he never answered the phone He was always there for her before Why had he left her alone? She tried to call him back As thoughts ran through her mind She was afraid he was with someone else She did not want him to leave her behind The next day he did not call Knowing he had treated her wrong Thinking of what he did the night before Left him depressed all day long She sat there crying in the dark As he did the same so many miles away He picked up the phone and dialed four numbers Before he realized he had nothing to say Three long days passed They still had not spoken She was more scared than she had ever been And her fragile heart was broken He knew what he must do He had to tell her the mistake he made Despite the fear of what he could lose He dialed the number and the phone rang It shocked her when she heard the ring She hesitated before she answered And when he told her he slept with another girl The tears fell faster She wanted to hang up right then But she listened to him apologize She tried to make out his words Through the sobs and sad cries She couldnt forgive him at the moment She simply said "alright" and left him there He stayed on the line long after she left Then he grabbed his car keys and ran down the stairs She lay in her bed Clinging tight to the sheets She did not even move She just wanted to weep He drove farther and farther Miles from his hometown He just wanted to take her in his arms He had to get to her somehow He drove as fast as he could Did not care about the traffic Then out of nowhere Thats where the crash happened She did not sleep at all that night She couldnt stand the pain Before she began to take a shower The phone started to ring She did not know who it was But she ran to the receiver She thought at first it was him Instead it was her mother She could tell her mom had been crying When she told her to turn to channel two The phone fell down hard on the floor When she saw what was on the news The funeral was tragic She had not seen him in two years Seeing him lying in the casket Is what brought all the tears Old memories started to flood back to her Most were good but some were bad Thats when she realized He was all she ever had "He was only eighteen," she heard them say "He had so much to give." She wished so hard that it could have been her She wished he would have lived The thing that hurt her the most Is that he was almost at her home She kept thinking he might have survived If only she had known After the funeral the police came to her house And handed her a letter It was an apology from him to her Saying that he would make this all better It was the sweetest thing she ever read And it brought more tears than ever She read it over and over again A tear falling with every single letter It said how they would spend their life together Get married and have a family It said how much he loved her And how he promised to make her happy She went home that day And just sat alone on her bed Reading his words again and again Repeating them in her head She took out her scrapbook And looked at their old pictures Her heart filled with pain Knowing that he was not with her She grabbed a pen and a notebook And began writing a letter When she finished she folded it up And bowed her head with a prayer She went into the kitchen And found the sharpest knife She had made her decision She gave up her life It was not because she wanted to die She just wanted to see him again And as she took her last lonely breath She was thinking of him They found her on the bed of blood With his letter in one hand and hers in the other They saw his picture lying on her heart And knew they were finally together i love you, jody!!! |
2005-02-11 | 2006-06-07 | 45415 | {
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"comment.id": 198,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:04",
"comment.author": "Kenny",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2007-10-01",
"comment.content": "Nice poem! Love It!!"
},
"199": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 199,
"comment.id": 199,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:19",
"comment.author": "Khanyisile Cele",
"comment.date": "at 2007-10-17",
"comment.content": "That was sweet and nice love your poems"
},
"200": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 200,
"comment.id": 200,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:04",
"comment.author": "Tati",
"comment.date": "at 2007-11-23",
"comment.content": "WOW.... THAT WAS INTENSE U DID A REALLY GOOD JOB I ALMOST CRYED READING IT U HAVE A GIFT"
},
"201": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 201,
"comment.id": 201,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:04",
"comment.author": "Mia",
"comment.date": "at 2008-01-09",
"comment.content": "Wow... is that enough to express my thoughts and feelings? i guess not, but I'm speechless"
},
"202": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 202,
"comment.id": 202,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:04",
"comment.author": "Composed Catastrophe",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2008-11-24",
"comment.content": "The last stanza is a sadistic twist! she died but its ok kind of thing idk i love how you did that though : ) great job long poem but i didn't even notice till i had to scroll back up to the top ! you made it flow nicely i hope it isn't true thought : / that would be sad 5/5 of course!"
}
} |
42 | 2018-02-27 02:26:08 | I WISH* | cassanova | 2007-08-19 | 4.8 | 69 | I wish... i wish i was you lip gloss, every day your lips i touch, always with you in your purse, id see your face so much, i wish i was your eye liner, in your eyes id be, finally theres a moment, where all you see is me, i wish i was your pants, actually your belt on your waist, wrapped tightly around you, as we went place to place, i wish i was your sweater, a turtle neck preferably, i could smell your scent, and kiss your neck indefinitely, i wish i was your mirror, id be the first to see your face, every morning you woke up, only us in a confined space, i wish i was yours, i wish with all my might, just for one more time, which we could spend a night.. |
2007-08-19 | 2007-08-30 | 69468 | {
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"comment.id": 77,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:47",
"comment.author": "grace",
"comment.date": "( F C ) at 2008-09-10",
"comment.content": "Ahhhhh sweet poem!! 5/5! =)"
},
"205": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 205,
"comment.id": 98,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:08",
"comment.author": "Arun Khan",
"comment.date": "( F P C ) at 2008-09-19",
"comment.content": "This was really well written, loved the theme.. must say, a piece of art... 5/5 Regards Arun."
},
"204": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 204,
"comment.id": 204,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 03:28:54",
"comment.author": "Paige",
"comment.date": "( F C ) at 2008-09-15",
"comment.content": "I love your writing style :) great poem :)"
},
"206": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 206,
"comment.id": 206,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:08",
"comment.author": "SashaMirage",
"comment.date": "( F P C ) at 2008-12-13",
"comment.content": "Wow, you really expressed how much you desire to be with this girl very well. I really enjoyed reading it. 5/5"
},
"207": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 207,
"comment.id": 207,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:08",
"comment.author": "clare demecillo",
"comment.date": "at 2012-11-07",
"comment.content": "VERY NICE"
}
} |
43 | 2018-02-27 02:26:10 | The Luckiest Guy | Goran Rahim | 2006-07-20 | 4.7 | 211 | Dear the luckiest guy in the world, I don't know you, All I know is you are the luckiest guy Because the girl who I loved, is your lover. That was my destiny, but don't know why Respect her, please respect her That is all I want from you. As not every person can get her love. Everyone is not lucky like you. I lost myself in her world, Even though I loved her a lot. But what could I do? My words were weaker than I thought. I am still wondering Nowadays how is this life to you? Every second is brighter As a princess said she loves you Do you ever feel sad? I don't think so still I am asking. There is no reason to be sad After you got that much loving. I don't know if you deserve her Because she is the best. But please make her happy, So my heart could get some rest. You are the luckiest guy As her lips said she loves you And here a hopeless guy is still waiting To hear a word; Even if she says "I hate you" |
2006-07-20 | 2007-04-11 | 35757 | {
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"comment.id": 208,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:19",
"comment.author": "rachel",
"comment.date": "at 2007-12-29",
"comment.content": "Wow wee. i love your poems"
},
"209": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 209,
"comment.id": 209,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 03:01:06",
"comment.author": "girly",
"comment.date": "at 2008-05-24",
"comment.content": "Love iiiiit."
},
"210": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 210,
"comment.id": 210,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 03:19:20",
"comment.author": "RiCEBUNNY",
"comment.date": "( F C D ) at 2009-03-05",
"comment.content": "I didn't really favor the structure of the poem but it was heart felt. Great poem indeed (:"
},
"211": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 211,
"comment.id": 211,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:10",
"comment.author": "bOlly danCer",
"comment.date": "( F C ) at 2009-05-19",
"comment.content": "Really missed reading your poems.. soo much pain... take care"
},
"212": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 212,
"comment.id": 212,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:10",
"comment.author": "Ian",
"comment.date": "( F C ) at 2010-05-12",
"comment.content": "Your like a Guru at Poetry. I wish I had good writings like this. Even out of the 93 ive written haha over a 4 year progress of trying to get better at it. Good poem, i like this. ian"
}
} |
44 | 2018-02-27 02:26:11 | Once Upon A Fairy Tale | TinyDancer46 | 2005-11-23 | 4.6 | 110 | Once upon a fairy tale Was a girl we all know well A princess only dreaming of The hope of finding her true love She searched the land but couldn't find The true love that she had in mind She tried to find him everyday Till her hopes all washed away She sat upon her empty throne Thinking that she'd be alone Everything in life felt wrong Until one day he came along Prince Charming was this prince's name And her lover he became She finally found her one true love The one that she'd been dreaming of Finally everything felt alright She had a prince to hold each night Someone to sit by on her throne No longer was this girl alone But then on one awful day He found Snow White and went away On a horse they waved goodbye This princess was left to cry She knew she'd have to live without The prince she cared so much about Goodbye to love and all the laughter Goodbye to happy ever after |
2005-11-23 | 2007-06-24 | 36269 | {
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"comment.id": 36,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:31:24",
"comment.author": "Fyri",
"comment.date": "at 2008-04-08",
"comment.content": "WOW!!!!! UMM THAT WAS SO GOOOD. LOVE IT!!"
},
"214": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 214,
"comment.id": 66,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:11",
"comment.author": "c 0 n f u s e d",
"comment.date": "( F C D ) at 2008-02-16",
"comment.content": "Good Job :)"
},
"213": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 213,
"comment.id": 213,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 04:23:31",
"comment.author": "Daniel Patrick",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2007-12-23",
"comment.content": "Faster and slower, all at the same time, or when you see their face, your heart stops on a dime. That's when you know, without a shred of doubt, that you are in love, and you have taken the right route. 5/5"
},
"216": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 216,
"comment.id": 216,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:11",
"comment.author": "Jenni",
"comment.date": "( F C D ) at 2008-04-08",
"comment.content": "Amazing. and so incredibly sad. makes me think and makes me wanna cry. great poem."
}
} |
45 | 2018-02-27 02:26:15 | The Luckiest Guy (part 2) | Goran Rahim | 2006-09-19 | 4.8 | 131 | Dear the luckiest guy in the world It is me again, the hopeless guy. Writing to you another note But I really don't know exactly why We both have something in common The angel that we both love. I am writing this to take out pain Not to make your life anymore tough. I was always dreaming and imagining One day she will open her eyes Then she'll realize how much I adore her How One day I'll be a surprise Having you in her life All my dreams have faded I am just a hopeless guy My every day is jaded. We were not alike That is why she chose you I was just being myself I was being so true You grew up in a land Which was full of brightness Me, since my childhood Got use to this darkness You can smile all the time As you have much happiness I got use to teardrops Yet for her, it is meaningless. I had the deepest feelings Yet never she could see Can you do me a favor? Advise her not to hate me You are the luckiest guy Finding the reality of my dream Yet I have no complaint As it is destiny's chosen theme |
2006-09-19 | 2007-04-11 | 79482 | {
"222": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 222,
"comment.id": 5,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:15",
"comment.author": "Waina Honey",
"comment.date": "at 2015-01-12",
"comment.content": "Reminds me of my ex boyfriend.. This poem makes me want to get back with him.. OH NO!"
},
"218": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 218,
"comment.id": 218,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:39:44",
"comment.author": "Emily E Mehigan",
"comment.date": "at 2007-09-25",
"comment.content": "Still holds my interest. Great job."
},
"219": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 219,
"comment.id": 219,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:30",
"comment.author": "Valerie",
"comment.date": "( F ) at 2007-11-03",
"comment.content": "One of the best poem. Superb :)."
},
"220": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 220,
"comment.id": 220,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:15",
"comment.author": "Crystal",
"comment.date": "( F P ) at 2008-06-02",
"comment.content": "That's such a sweet poem i feel sorry for the less fortunate guy he sounds sweet..."
},
"221": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 221,
"comment.id": 221,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:15",
"comment.author": "mandy",
"comment.date": "( F C D ) at 2009-03-18",
"comment.content": "It was very clever and sweet. Somewhere in the middle I lost the flow of the poem, but the rest was very well written. I enjoyed the simplicity of your words; making it easy to follow what youâ??re trying to tell the readers. But I also liked the meaning behind each word that you wrote, nicely done. 5/5 -mandy :)"
}
} |
46 | 2018-02-27 02:26:19 | Proposal | Matt Dahl | 2006-12-01 | 4.8 | 270 | Palms are sweaty Knees are weak My heart skips a beat And it's hard to speak Looking into your eyes No words were spoken As hard as I tried The silence remained unbroken I take your hand And drop to a knee Wondering, fearing What will your answer be? For better or worse Until death do us part I swear that I'll love you With all of my heart As we grow old And time turns the page I promise our love Will never show age So take this ring Along with my heart Together forever We'll never part For there's only one thing I need in my life And that is for you To become my wife For you are the one thing That makes me feel whole You brighten my life And touch my soul In times that are happy Or filled with sorrow Together side by side We'll face every tomorrow So until the end of time These seven words will always ring true "Forever and always I will love you" Copyright Matthew M. Dahl Please Vote and or Comment Thank You very much! |
2006-12-01 | 2006-12-09 | 13715 | {
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"poem_x_comment.id": 227,
"comment.id": 192,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:19",
"comment.author": "ketaki",
"comment.date": "at 2016-07-21",
"comment.content": "Nice and commit ed love i loved the piece of work."
},
"223": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 223,
"comment.id": 199,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:19",
"comment.author": "Khanyisile Cele",
"comment.date": "at 2007-10-17",
"comment.content": "That was sweet and nice love your poems"
},
"225": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 225,
"comment.id": 208,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:19",
"comment.author": "rachel",
"comment.date": "at 2007-12-29",
"comment.content": "Wow wee. i love your poems"
},
"224": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 224,
"comment.id": 224,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 03:02:49",
"comment.author": "Polaroid",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2007-11-15",
"comment.content": "OMG! i loved that it was really great, so stirring, and passionate. you;re a really great writer, keep up the AWESOME WORK 5/5 polaroid"
},
"226": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 226,
"comment.id": 226,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:29:18",
"comment.author": "c 0 n f u s e d",
"comment.date": "( F C D ) at 2008-02-24",
"comment.content": "WOOOOOOW! :X nice work."
}
} |
47 | 2018-02-27 02:26:21 | Mom | Karl Wild GG23 | 2006-12-10 | 4.9 | 59 | You were my first word ever spoken, The one who's always there, To me your love is the ultimate token, Next to you, other mother's don't compare. The way you're always there for me, No matter what I've done, That five letter name Marie, To me is the only one. You pick me up when I fall, While wanting nothing in return, Always answer when I call, Your love, I never had to earn. You taught me right from wrong, Showed me good from bad, Loved me all along, You're the best friend I've ever had. For me, You've always came through, I mean what more can I say, Words can't describe how much I love you, Thanks Mom, You've made me the man I am today. Love you Mom Always and Forever |
2006-12-10 | 2007-10-16 | 37020 | {
"229": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 229,
"comment.id": 193,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:21",
"comment.author": "Jodie Phillips",
"comment.date": "( F P C ) at 2008-02-12",
"comment.content": "Wow that is so so sweet. If my boys grow up to write something like that for me i would be the happiest mum alive...Thats what mums are for though, they should be there no matter what i know i am gonna be"
},
"228": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 228,
"comment.id": 228,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:42:40",
"comment.author": "Neil Marsden",
"comment.date": "( P ) at 2008-01-20",
"comment.content": "What an amazingly crafted little piece, well done! Neil."
},
"230": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 230,
"comment.id": 230,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:43:22",
"comment.author": "Sara",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2008-10-26",
"comment.content": "You see heaven's missing an angel, Because you're here with me, But heaven can't have you back, You're mine for eternity. awww this is soo cuteee"
},
"232": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 232,
"comment.id": 232,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:21",
"comment.author": "Pedney",
"comment.date": "at 2013-01-14",
"comment.content": "That was very inspiring and encouraging"
}
} |
48 | 2018-02-27 02:26:24 | Tear Stained face | Princess09 | 2005-11-11 | 4.7 | 67 | Tears poured down, When his words came out. Everything he said, Was just another doubt. She was never good enough, Not even for her. But now her dreams, Flew by broken by a slur. He said he loved her, Then took it right back! He said he cared, But said it to attack! One tear at a time, Stained her pretty face. No one knew she was so fragile, Like a thin piece of lace. She stared at the knife, As a tear hit the ground, Would she dare use it, When it once spread her feelings around ? She used to cut but stopped. And was happy for a while. But he killed her! With his first smile. She wondered why, He would make her cry? Make her not want to live, But die? With a tear stained face, She took her life. Killed herself, With an already used knife. She did it for love, Her tears said it all, He was her depression, When he pretened to fall. No more tears, On her tear stained face, Nothing left, But her missery that took place! |
2005-11-11 | 2008-03-23 | 119610 | {
"237": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 237,
"comment.id": 19,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:24",
"comment.author": "manzoor",
"comment.date": "( C ) at 2012-02-22",
"comment.content": "Hmm awesm"
},
"233": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 233,
"comment.id": 233,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:24",
"comment.author": "Sarah Drew",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2005-12-21",
"comment.content": "Beautifully sad poem. There was so much emotion in this."
},
"234": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 234,
"comment.id": 234,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:24",
"comment.author": "Kurmit-Chaya",
"comment.date": "( P C D ) at 2006-04-10",
"comment.content": "I loved this poem your a great writer keep it up 5/5"
},
"235": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 235,
"comment.id": 235,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:24",
"comment.author": "Sole",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2006-07-18",
"comment.content": "Again. I'm runnign out of things to say. Great work, it flowed really well and the rhyming was almost perfection. Keep it up! Peace. [Sole]"
},
"236": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 236,
"comment.id": 236,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:24",
"comment.author": "xOInLoveWithYouxO",
"comment.date": "( F P C ) at 2008-12-18",
"comment.content": "Wow."
}
} |
49 | 2018-02-27 02:26:25 | I'm Not Crying | Inside the Liar | 2009-02-11 | 4.8 | 17 | Say all the words you want baby But I'm not breaking down Your words just bounce right off me My tears are nowhere to be found You and I are over That's road's already been paved And it's too late for you to realize What we had could've been saved Now that your girl dumped you You say you know how I feel But don't expect my sympathy 'Cause you caught the raw end of that deal You're begging me to take you back The tears running down your face But the emotions have frozen within me And I'm in a different place. A place where I don't have to care About how hard you're trying And all I can think as I turn away Is that for once I'm not crying Copyright 2009 S. Sieglaff |
2009-02-11 | 12580 | {
"238": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 238,
"comment.id": 238,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:25",
"comment.author": "Lawliet",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2009-02-15",
"comment.content": "Wow I seriously like how you penned this poem. Yeah I think the guy deserve what he got...cause the way you wrote it... seem like when he choose you over another gal, he didn't he care much bout ur feelings...and now tt he's been hurt and knows how you have felt b4...he wants a second chance which he totally doesn't deserve.The ending was great to up up how u feel about him Excellent Job 5/5"
},
"239": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 239,
"comment.id": 239,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:25",
"comment.author": "Emily",
"comment.date": "( P ) at 2009-02-16",
"comment.content": "Awesome flow."
},
"240": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 240,
"comment.id": 240,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:25",
"comment.author": "Stephen",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2009-02-16",
"comment.content": "This poem is very well written, I felt the raw emotion as I read it, and you ended it very well. You felt a sense of pride at the end, such as your standing up for yourself.. Very good very good 5/5"
},
"241": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 241,
"comment.id": 241,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:25",
"comment.author": "Joy",
"comment.date": "at 2009-02-16",
"comment.content": "I can relate =|"
},
"242": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 242,
"comment.id": 242,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:25",
"comment.author": "nicole",
"comment.date": "at 2009-02-16",
"comment.content": "Love it, 5/5"
}
} |
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50 | 2018-02-27 02:26:28 | Ripped Paper Hearts / I Will Never Belong To You | aDORKable x3 | 2006-12-16 | 5.0 | 22 | I'm sick of being the best friend When I want to be their girl I'm sick of making them my everything When I'm not allowed in their world I'm sick of all the heartaches Of all the hurting and the pain My tears just can't stop falling Like a summer's stormy rain Staring at you from across the room My heart could always flutter I make it a point to look for you But when I talk I barely mutter Why do I care so much When you couldn't have cared less Why do you torture me And leave me standing here a mess My ripped paper heart Torn right at the crease The little rips and previous tears Still hurt, to say the least It's the constant torture of seeing you But that killing pain inside I always be the one far away Never the girl by your side You don't mean to be so mean It's just that you don't care I dress up and look pretty, just for you It takes me hours to pick out what to wear The perfected brush on my powdered eyes And a sweep of mascara of two Just seem to go so unnoticed Whenever I'm around you I could look you in the eyes But you wouldn't hold my glare You'll be thinking about someone else Who wasn't even there Hurt replaces my feelings inside When I finally realize it's true That no matter what I do I will never belong to you |
2006-12-16 | 2006-12-17 | 7411 | {
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"comment.id": 30,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:34:57",
"comment.author": "allex0r",
"comment.date": "at 2014-10-31",
"comment.content": "Em why is this so on point :("
},
"243": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 243,
"comment.id": 198,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:04",
"comment.author": "Kenny",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2007-10-01",
"comment.content": "Nice poem! Love It!!"
},
"244": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 244,
"comment.id": 244,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:28",
"comment.author": "Amy",
"comment.date": "at 2008-03-30",
"comment.content": "To every person who's always been there for someone else who never felt as close. I hate seeing people who've always been by someone's side and watching as one day their feelings change to ones of affection, only to see the look on their heart as their special someone pulled a 'I always thought of you as a sister' on them. amazing, you hit the nail dead on! much love for this poem!"
},
"245": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 245,
"comment.id": 245,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:28",
"comment.author": "Ginger",
"comment.date": "at 2008-04-12",
"comment.content": "Excellent poem. I know exactly what that feels like. You poem says all the things I never could. Great job! 5/5"
},
"246": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 246,
"comment.id": 246,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:28",
"comment.author": "Aliah",
"comment.date": "( P ) at 2008-09-14",
"comment.content": "Damn, this poem was really nice. i could feel the pain so true, damn true!"
}
} |
51 | 2018-02-27 02:26:30 | Cheated . | BrokenREALiTy | 2006-11-14 | 4.6 | 296 | Sometimes you just gotta let go, No matter how hard it seems. Because sometimes you just can't fix, All your shattered dreams. No matter how much it hurts, Or how many tears you've shed. It was your fault for believing, The lies that you were fed. With your heart throbbing, And your stomach full of butterflies. You can't see past the smile, That always defies. Mesmerized by his beauty, You've been hypnotized by his voice. Couldn't help but fall in love, Giving in without a choice. You know that he's lying, But you still choose to ignore. And though you can live without him, What would you be living for? He cheated and you know it, You can't ignore what's there. Gotta face the truth, Instead of pretending you don't care. And after writing this poem, I think I can finally see. That he wasn't worth the time, And he wasn't good enough for me. [c] 2O06 Mindy Huang |
2006-11-14 | 2008-01-25 | 39064 | {
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"poem_x_comment.id": 248,
"comment.id": 248,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:59:26",
"comment.author": "jazmin",
"comment.date": "at 2007-05-07",
"comment.content": "Wow great poem!!!"
},
"249": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 249,
"comment.id": 249,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 04:59:02",
"comment.author": "Lozbi",
"comment.date": "( F C D ) at 2007-07-04",
"comment.content": "It's magical. It's perfect. I open my eyes... ...It's gone. ^^those lines are wonderful! && what d'ya mean its not really a poem poem lol.. its a poem and its great. you did a really good job and i look forward to readin more of your poems .x"
},
"250": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 250,
"comment.id": 250,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 05:01:02",
"comment.author": "Marc Ortiz",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2007-07-06",
"comment.content": "Oh wow. I really enjoyed this one. It was simple but beautiful. Just like real love.. Well done my friend. Keep writing! And again many thanks for the comments. I really appreciate it."
},
"251": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 251,
"comment.id": 251,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:30",
"comment.author": "Viola x MyBrokenSmile x",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2007-08-02",
"comment.content": "Wow well this really amazed me. again your poems present such a unique but truthful view (i really think you're quite mature for your age btw). i'm glad you realized he wasn't worth you..cause really no guy that cheats is! in this one I especailly loved this stanza: No matter how much it hurts, Or how many tears you've shed. It was your fault for believing, The lies that you were fed. It really spoke to me. I feel the same way about a guy right now. Sometimes we're just too taken away by love to see clearly..thus the expression Love is Blind! but anyways, the poem was great..i LOVE it. absolutely true and very meaningful. keep it up! =] --Viola"
},
"252": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 252,
"comment.id": 252,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 05:21:17",
"comment.author": "Gloria",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2007-11-29",
"comment.content": "Thx!!!"
}
} |
52 | 2018-02-27 02:26:30 | What kind of guy | Switchblade89 | 2005-05-17 | 4.7 | 127 | What kind of guy do you look for? one that in time you can adore? one that you hope will remain friends, even when your love ends? One that flatters you with whispers in your ears? one that holds the tissue to wipe your tears? a guy that will do anything you want him to? a guy who loves you for the real "you"? One that will always hold you tight, keeping you from nightmares all night? a guy that reminds you how beautiful you are, regardless if you are close or far? A guy who shares his food when you want more? or a guy who opens and holds the door? a guy who can stare at you for an hour and a half, just to see your smile and hear your laugh? One that would stay up to talk on the phone, just so you would never feel alone? A guy who knows a little bit of romance, gives you a long kiss after a slow dance? One that apologizes no matter how long, for even the simplest things he's done wrong? one that would choose you over anything, cause you with him makes him feel like a king? a guy whos more amusing than a clown, and can always turn your frown upside down? a guy that always keeps you from being bored, and for the rest of time by him your adored? I'm asking all these questions,do you want to know why? Because I would like to be that guy, I would like to be the guy who does all this for you, now the main question is "am I going to be able to"? |
2005-05-17 | 2013-03-12 | 12479 | {
"254": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 254,
"comment.id": 198,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:04",
"comment.author": "Kenny",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2007-10-01",
"comment.content": "Nice poem! Love It!!"
},
"255": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 255,
"comment.id": 219,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:30",
"comment.author": "Valerie",
"comment.date": "( F ) at 2007-11-03",
"comment.content": "One of the best poem. Superb :)."
},
"253": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 253,
"comment.id": 253,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:30",
"comment.author": "Brandy",
"comment.date": "at 2007-06-16",
"comment.content": "Heyy!!! That is one of the BEST poems i have read from a guy. You know, its REALLY hard to find a b/f just because not a lot of people have those qualities. Heck, a lot of people dont even care about most of those things. If you really are like that, i would love to talk to you. My e-mail is brandyrocs@hotmail.com......or......my myspace is, www.myspace.com/brandyrocs. I hope to hear from you soon! :) -Brandy"
},
"256": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 256,
"comment.id": 256,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:30",
"comment.author": "Twisted Mind Broken Soul",
"comment.date": "( F C D ) at 2008-12-08",
"comment.content": "This is such a beautiful piece, written extremely well. You have picked perfect words, good vocabulary, nice rhymes. Everything you have put in this master piece is just fabulous, I wouldn't write it any better. I seriously think you should submit that into a contest or something because that is unbelievable. You seem like a great person and I would love to get to know you more"
},
"257": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 257,
"comment.id": 257,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:29:44",
"comment.author": "christine",
"comment.date": "( C ) at 2009-06-20",
"comment.content": "Love it(: great job."
}
} |
53 | 2018-02-27 02:26:35 | If Life Was A Dream (Collab) | Cindy | 2007-06-07 | 5.0 | 31 | If life was a dream You'd be here with me Laughing, hand in hand Smiling for all to see If life was a dream Together we'd grow old Still making future plans Forgetting years stole. If life was a dream Sun would never fade alone Darkness simply surrenders To love you have shown If life was a dream No tear would fall from eyes No prayer will go unheard True love could never die If life was a dream I'd be back in your arms Kissing your sweet lips Safe from all life's harms If life was a dream I'd never feel alone Pain would not exist For you would be home If life was a dream No plans would be betrayed Love will shower everywhere No need to be afraid If life was a dream Why would I need to sleep? When I have you by my side And your heart to keep http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=176982 End Of Eternity Written By : Cynthia Graver and End Of Eternity June 8 , 2007 |
2007-06-07 | 2007-06-12 | 19884 | {
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"comment.id": 258,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:35",
"comment.author": "uwouldntno",
"comment.date": "at 2007-06-14",
"comment.content": "Wow this is a really good poem... I hope you continue writeing you are very good sincerely yours uwouldntno"
},
"259": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 259,
"comment.id": 259,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 04:57:05",
"comment.author": "Tracy D Rollings",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2007-06-15",
"comment.content": "Excellent poem, very unique style and vocabulary was great and so was the flow, wonderfully written poem of love, great job, your friend Tracy dean 5/5 hope you return the favor"
},
"260": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 260,
"comment.id": 260,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 03:18:43",
"comment.author": "RETARTED GHOST",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2007-06-23",
"comment.content": "This poem was wonderful.each stanza was greatly written.the last stanza was perfect.this was unique and entirely different from all other poems.all i can say is that this poem is beautifully written. keep up the good work my friend. best wishes and take care."
},
"261": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 261,
"comment.id": 261,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:35",
"comment.author": "c 0 n f u s e d",
"comment.date": "( F C D ) at 2008-03-10",
"comment.content": "I totally love this because every single word in this poem is exactly whats on my mind. i love it ."
},
"262": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 262,
"comment.id": 262,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:35",
"comment.author": "DoRk",
"comment.date": "( P ) at 2010-05-07",
"comment.content": "Oh so true but sumtimes u jus do wish life really ws a dream"
}
} |
54 | 2018-02-27 02:26:40 | Cupid's little arrow | Kaila | 2008-02-03 | 4.6 | 21 | Stabbing me with intensity it digs deep into my heart, No matter how much I tug it does not want to part, Wedged into the bottom-less pit of my broken soul. Digging deeper into my chest it makes itself a whole. Puppy dog eyes stare gazing at you from afar, Watching you walk so elegantly, wondering who you are, Breathing deep trying to catch a smell of your scent, Questioning if the angels in Heaven miss you yet. This wound in my chest is building up such pain, Sucking itself in deeper it is driving me insane, Engulfed into my veins cutting into my soul, Trying to figure out what exactly is its goal. Longing puckering lips smile in your direction, It seems as though this love is a horrible infection, Blushing red cheeks turn brighter as you come in sight, The urge to kiss you here and now is a feeling hard to fight. The arrow in your heart is now connected with another, Holding hands and kissing faces you now do love each other, This wound is still a part of me and will not go away, Remind me to tell Cupid, Happy Valentines Day. |
2008-02-03 | 12588 | {
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"comment.id": 263,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:40",
"comment.author": "InvisiblyBroken15",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2008-02-15",
"comment.content": "Awwwww beautiful poem to read on valentines day....i love all of your poems that i've read...great work..you're very talented.5/5"
},
"264": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 264,
"comment.id": 264,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 04:05:56",
"comment.author": "LostAndConfused",
"comment.date": "( C ) at 2008-02-18",
"comment.content": "Really Cute poem 5/5"
},
"265": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 265,
"comment.id": 265,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:40",
"comment.author": "xxxlOvElY sWeEtHeArTxxx",
"comment.date": "( C ) at 2008-03-11",
"comment.content": "I agree love the irony in this piece 5/5"
},
"266": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 266,
"comment.id": 266,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 03:04:45",
"comment.author": "Lost and Confused",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2008-03-12",
"comment.content": "This poem... is amazing. The way it was written was brilliant. As a writer, not just a poet, you have the highest potential! I really felt every line in this poem which is very impressive. 5/5 and I'm left in awe... [ Praised by Kaila | Approved by PnQ Mod Account ]"
},
"267": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 267,
"comment.id": 267,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:40",
"comment.author": "Spirit",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2009-01-15",
"comment.content": "OMG I love love love the ironic ending. This poem has a small light-hearted-ness about it, making it diffenent from all the other dark poems in your collection. It's refreshing to see an artist go slightly out of there own box every once in a while. Usually when people try new things the poems come out good, but not great. I believe that you handled the transition beautifully and with natural ease. This poem may not have perfect rhyme but the flow more than makes up for that. Each stanza melts into the other one making it all the more easy to read. the only thin negetive that I can think to say would be, I wish you had a few more lighter-hearted poems. 5/5 thanks for the read>~Spirit~>"
}
} |
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55 | 2018-02-27 02:26:45 | ThE HaRdeST ThInG In tHE WoRLd.. | stephyG | 2006-01-19 | 4.7 | 106 | The hardest thing in the world Is what I'm about to say please listen to my words Before you turn away wer've been together a while everyone says were great Lately Ive felt different maybe this is not fate I know you love me dearly boy I love you too but the time has come to say I'm breaking up with you. sorry that was sudden please listen to me For these reasons I need to say These reasons we couldn't be 'Its not you its me' Would be a lie to tell Im going to tell you the truth As you know me so very well. To the best boyfriend of all No one could ever compare sometimes you broke your promises saying you would always be there I was always there for you at your every request you found it hard to realize I was always placed second best. I understand friends are important Maybe more so than me But baby you needed to understand That slowly you were loosing me. i may not have left your heart I was slipping out of touch did you ever see my pain? I cared about you so much. Never forget that I still do I love you till this day But baby it cant work out Theres no more we can say. Please make me a promise One that you must hold Promise to take care of yourself Till the day we grow old You will always be my everything Even Till the day I die Baby this has been the hardest thing saying the words good bye. Please Read and Comment as it would mean so much to me..love you guys, your all talented!! |
2006-01-19 | 2007-06-01 | 73794 | {
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"poem_x_comment.id": 270,
"comment.id": 213,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 04:23:31",
"comment.author": "Daniel Patrick",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2007-12-23",
"comment.content": "Faster and slower, all at the same time, or when you see their face, your heart stops on a dime. That's when you know, without a shred of doubt, that you are in love, and you have taken the right route. 5/5"
},
"268": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 268,
"comment.id": 268,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:45",
"comment.author": "pearl",
"comment.date": "at 2007-06-29",
"comment.content": "You rock"
},
"269": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 269,
"comment.id": 269,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:45",
"comment.author": "Alicia Jane",
"comment.date": "( P C ) at 2007-10-28",
"comment.content": "Ii really like this. It sucks how guys say u mean soo much but der friends come first. lol anways keep up da gud work xx"
},
"271": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 271,
"comment.id": 271,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:45",
"comment.author": "melissa",
"comment.date": "at 2008-02-25",
"comment.content": "I Love This Poem"
},
"272": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 272,
"comment.id": 272,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:45",
"comment.author": "xgreltz11",
"comment.date": "at 2012-12-01",
"comment.content": "Wow.i love this poem.."
}
} |
56 | 2018-02-27 02:26:47 | Magical kiss | cassanova | 2007-03-11 | 4.9 | 33 | I look in her eyes, and it tickles my soul, the magical kisses, are about to unfold.. staring into her eyes, while holding her hips, my body starting to tremble, anticipating those lips.. i close my eyes, and lean in for a kiss, shaking so much, i hope i don't miss.. then our lips met, and it was the best, my heart beated so fast, i lost my breath.. looking in her eyes, the feelings a bliss, and every peck from her, is a magical kiss.... |
2007-03-11 | 20649 | {
"274": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 274,
"comment.id": 76,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:47",
"comment.author": "cryNOmore",
"comment.date": "at 2008-06-05",
"comment.content": "Wow I really enjoyed this poem it flows so smoothly."
},
"275": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 275,
"comment.id": 77,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:47",
"comment.author": "grace",
"comment.date": "( F C ) at 2008-09-10",
"comment.content": "Ahhhhh sweet poem!! 5/5! =)"
},
"273": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 273,
"comment.id": 273,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:47",
"comment.author": "Jennifer Dziak",
"comment.date": "( F P C ) at 2008-02-15",
"comment.content": "Adorable!"
},
"276": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 276,
"comment.id": 276,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 03:39:15",
"comment.author": "Ravi",
"comment.date": "at 2008-09-10",
"comment.content": "Superb wordings. Love this poem."
},
"277": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 277,
"comment.id": 277,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:47",
"comment.author": "DARK MEMORIES",
"comment.date": "( C ) at 2009-05-08",
"comment.content": "Awww this pome is so adorable how cute i love it it was well written"
}
} |
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57 | 2018-02-27 02:26:48 | Love pulled the trigger. | ASPHYXIATED | 2006-03-09 | 4.9 | 35 | Rip me open slowly, You like to hear me shout, Sit back and baby, Watch my blood flow out, Smile your beautiful smile, As your dagger tears through me, The pain in my eyes arouses you, I'm where you want me to be. Fill my cup with poison, Then laugh as i crouch in pain, Your sparkling eyes now blood shot, From revenge so much you gain, Torturing my love forsaken soul, Compare me to her each chance you get, The poison of your hatred, Began when our eyes first met. Place the shotgun on my temple, My life rests in your shaken hand, Relax don't worry sweetie, I'll jump at each demand, This power you behold now, Is one drenched in sorrow, With one soft simple push, You could demolish my tomorrow. Suicide they'll consider, Homicide sounds more mature, Manslaughter I doubt you'd pull off, You want a bloodbath on the floor, Make your motive now dear, For your murdering me as we chat, I love you forever baby. While your hiding my body.. Remember that. |
2006-03-09 | 6924 | {
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"comment.id": 278,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:48",
"comment.author": "Escoffier",
"comment.date": "( P ) at 2007-10-18",
"comment.content": "Wow one of the best poems I have every read Outstanding, deep and intense."
},
"279": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 279,
"comment.id": 279,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 04:37:59",
"comment.author": "Valerie",
"comment.date": "( F ) at 2007-11-04",
"comment.content": "I really like this. Good job. I hope you can read mine too and comment on them :)."
},
"280": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 280,
"comment.id": 280,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:48",
"comment.author": "Marylou L",
"comment.date": "( P C ) at 2007-11-06",
"comment.content": "You did a wonderful jopb at saying what you felt. good job."
},
"281": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 281,
"comment.id": 281,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 04:42:43",
"comment.author": "rachel",
"comment.date": "at 2007-12-30",
"comment.content": "I liked the poem flow and sense of rhymth"
},
"282": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 282,
"comment.id": 282,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:48",
"comment.author": "skittlez",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2008-03-30",
"comment.content": "Wow that was great"
}
} |
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58 | 2018-02-27 02:26:50 | Acceptance | BrokenREALiTy | 2007-07-03 | 5.0 | 33 | You know the typical teenage girl, With the shattered cries and defeated pride? Remember the broken hearts; the many secrets, And the agonizing pain they try to hide? It's funny how they're looked down upon; How much they get yelled at for not letting go. And what's even more amusing is that I do that now, When I used to be one of those. Those little girls with the made-up smiles, Looking forward to nothing but a fairy tale demise. Walking around hopeful, with such naivety, Just to end up with a loved one to despise. Broken down and tainted; unwilling to love again, Staggering in agony and drowning in lost hope. Trying so hard to find the path they've lost, Attempting with all energy left to cope. And though I still sit among lost memories, I've open myself and done what those girls can't. To slowly reveal the heart inside of me, And accept the love of another man. [c] 2O07 Mindy Huang Does it make sense? I don't know what I was trying to write... It just popped into mind, so I typed it here. |
2007-07-03 | 24172 | {
"283": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 283,
"comment.id": 283,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:50",
"comment.author": "MyuhhhBuggg",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2008-03-25",
"comment.content": "Wow hun! this is brilliant! :] i loved every stanza! great write! i love your work! sorry i've been really busy and haven't gotten on here much. miss ya too hun!"
},
"284": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 284,
"comment.id": 284,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:50",
"comment.author": "Anonymous Angel",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2008-03-28",
"comment.content": "Hey, I liked your poem, the flow was great, just as great as your vocab:) Its a poem some people can relate too, like me.. keep up the good work! kisses stephanie"
},
"285": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 285,
"comment.id": 285,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:50",
"comment.author": "Finding myself",
"comment.date": "at 2008-05-09",
"comment.content": "This was good i could fully understand it"
},
"286": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 286,
"comment.id": 286,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:50",
"comment.author": "karina",
"comment.date": "( P ) at 2008-05-27",
"comment.content": "Koo i liked it"
},
"287": {
"poem_x_comment.id": 287,
"comment.id": 287,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:50",
"comment.author": "maryann",
"comment.date": "at 2009-11-26",
"comment.content": "Hey i just found this in my favs I don't remember reading it but i just wna say its amazing and it makes perfect sense :) tc"
}
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59 | 2018-02-27 02:26:54 | The One You Forgot | *Charisma* | 2007-01-04 | 5.0 | 25 | A simple word can break my soul Rip me in half, no longer whole. I'm shaking at the very thought Of being the one you forgot. You're everything in life to me The reason why I want to breathe I smile just when I think of you And all those things you say and do. Yet, if you don't feel the same No one can we really blame. It's just the way life sometimes goes You can't escape all of its blows. But I wish this once to be free Of the hope we'd never be. That's something I don't want to face. Don't want to feel so out of place. I've planned everything around us Now it may not be enough. Threads are barely holding on And your words can break their bond. Or you can make them tighter still Renew my strength and my will. Keep me believing love is real If you return the way I feel Please don't hurt me, but if you do Make it gentle. Help me through. I love you and fear that time Will cost me my peace of mind. I pray I didn't wait too long To let you know my love is strong. And without you it's merely waste Once so sweet, now bitter taste. So I don't know what your words will be But I pray they are kind to me. I hope they are filled with love That I'm the one you're thinking of. But I'm shaking at the very thought Of being the one you forgot. PLEASE RRC! I will do the same! Charisma* |
2007-01-04 | 2007-01-14 | 11379 | {
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"comment.id": 288,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:48:19",
"comment.author": "Hopelessly Devoted to You",
"comment.date": "( F P ) at 2009-02-17",
"comment.content": "Wow i wrote a poem just like this but yours is way better, mine cud be improved on, i like ur better tho, great work 5/5"
},
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"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:54",
"comment.author": "MaRae",
"comment.date": "at 2009-03-02",
"comment.content": "Absolutly BEAUTIFUL!!! I Loved it!!!"
},
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"comment.id": 291,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:54",
"comment.author": "Himalee",
"comment.date": "( P C ) at 2009-08-27",
"comment.content": "Beautiful!!! :)"
},
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"comment.id": 292,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:54",
"comment.author": "Nicholas",
"comment.date": "( F P C ) at 2011-02-13",
"comment.content": "Awesome Write! I know these feelings all too well! I hope you have a great day, Chica!"
}
} |
60 | 2018-02-27 02:26:57 | If I could. | BlueDreams | 2007-06-18 | 4.9 | 36 | If I could catch a million stars, I know just what I'd do, I'd arrange them on a paper, And sing them back to you. If I could give you gifts of gold, I'd have each one inscribed, With a special memory, That I hold, dear, inside. I'd give you everything you'd want, Or you could ever need, But that would never measure, All you've given me. With honesty and compassion, You lend a tender ear. And when I look into your eyes, My troubles disappear. But, I am not a rich man, Nor lucky enough to catch a star, I can only give you one thing... All that's in my heart. This is something you'll never be without, Whether you are near or far, For it is a simple but precious gift... My love is where you are. MAY 15 2007 http://www.shadowspoet.com/theshadowsofray5.html |
2007-06-18 | 2007-06-18 | 16064 | {
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"comment.id": 293,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:57",
"comment.author": "Rachel",
"comment.date": "( F P C D ) at 2008-01-05",
"comment.content": "Beautifully penned. It flowed well and conveyed such a sweet message to your love...Nicely done!"
},
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"comment.id": 294,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:57",
"comment.author": "Gabrielle",
"comment.date": "( C D ) at 2008-02-07",
"comment.content": "Whoever you wrote this for is very lucky to have such love.... 5/5"
},
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"comment.id": 295,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:57",
"comment.author": "Fall For You Again",
"comment.date": "( F P C ) at 2008-09-01",
"comment.content": "Wow, so i'm new to your poetry, but i'm loving it. you have such an expressive voice and convey it in such a soft, melodic way. it's truly beautiful. thanks so much for sharing!"
},
"296": {
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"comment.id": 296,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:57",
"comment.author": "Kayla",
"comment.date": "( F P C ) at 2008-09-07",
"comment.content": "This was so pretty. It gave me chills. Beautiful. I don't know much about poetry so I can't give you an expert comment about how \"these words worked great with these thoughts...\" or what not but I can say that you are amazing. Great job. ~Kayla"
},
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"comment.id": 297,
"comment.ts": "2018-02-27 02:26:57",
"comment.author": "blazingSapphire",
"comment.date": "at 2012-05-14",
"comment.content": "Wow... wow... she is lucky whoever this is for.. beautiful romantic poem ..like..wow.. \"This is something you'll never be without, Whether you are near or far, For it is a simple but precious gift... My love is where you are.\" ^_^"
}
} |
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